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Story Or Series Title: Water and Fire (www.fanfiction.net/s/2765729/1/Water_and_Fire)
Fandom: X-Men: The Movie
Author's Name: SailorUranus726 (www.fanfiction.net/u/456420/SailorUranus726)
Full Name (plus titles if any): Nikki
Full Species(es): Human/Mutant
Hair Color (include adjectives): "shoulder length hair that was reddish brown"
Eye Color (include adjectives): "greenish/grayish eyes that were sometimes mixed in with blue"
Unusual Markings/Colorations: "She was short, only 5’3’’ and average weight."
Special Possessions (if any): John's heart/balls
Annoying Origin: She poured water over a girl she was fighting with and then turned it in to whip to beat the girl for attacking her little sister. Also, she's from Rhode Island
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Rogue's friend. roomates with Rogue and Kitty, John's girlfriend and the mother of his child
Annoying Special Abilities: Hydrokinetic
Other Annoying Traits: Ability to make the Professor send John, Rogue and Bobby via car to pick her up, this takes several days so it's mostly an excuse for the sue and John to screw
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
This is my first Xmen fic and I know, I hate mary sue’s but this story was born from a day dream that I’ve been having and I needed to write down. Yea Pyro is my favorite character, which you will tell after you read this. Please be gentle on reviews lol.
It was a sign.
Four girls, a little younger then her, stalked up and stood around her, eyes were narrowed as they tried to intimidate her. Nikki stood up and sat on the table facing the girls. She tossed her wet hair behind her shoulder and stared them down.
“Who are you?” a tan, dark haired girl said, folding her arms and tilting her chin up. Nikki rolled her eyes; this girl thought she was a princess.
“I’m Nicole. And you?”
“I’m Amara Aquilla.” She snapped; almost as if Nikki was suppose to know who she was.
“And I’m Tabitha Smith.” Stated a blond girl with way too much make up.
“My name is Jubilee” said a girl who almost resembled the first but you could tell they weren’t related. This girl was younger then the first two; she looked about Nikki’s younger sisters’ age.
“And my name is Rahne Sinclair,” The fourth snarled. She had bright red hair and flaming green eyes. “Stay away from John.”
“What?” Nikki nearly choked on her laughter.
“You think this is funny,” Rahne growled. She morphed into a brown wolf and pounced on Nikki, snapping her jaws dangerously close to her neck. Tabitha kneeled on the table and pet the wolf form of Rahne. She smiled devilishly at Nikki.
“You heard her, stay away from John Allerdyce. We’ve been her a lot longer then you have and can easily get you kicked out. X-men trust those they know, and it takes a a while to earn trust.”
The giant fish tank in the room began to rattle on its stand. Nikki was clenching her jaw in rage. Who were these… GIRLS… to think they could tell her to stay away from the man she was in love with. She was breathing heavily through her nose and the glass began to crack. The four girls’ heads snapped toward the tank, eyes wide. Rahne turned back into her human form, still above Nikki. John rushed into the room, hearing the commotion.
And here John is lovey dovey (LJ wouldn't let me cut this section at all so)
He was about to step out from behind the tree, the biggest smile of his life was on his face. This was the moment he was waiting for. She was right there, although he couldn’t see her that well, he could make out it was a girl and he was positive it was her. It was like a dream, or from a Shakespearean play. He took a breath to say something, anything, even blurt out all his filling into one word. But suddenly he fell to the ground on his side.
Disoriented and winded, he took a moment, lying on his back. Whoever it was, he was going to beat the ever-living shit out of them. He took a deep breath and pushed whoever it was off him and sat up. “What the fuck?” he yelled, clenching his eyes shut and rubbing the back of his head. When he opened them, his jaw nearly touched the ground.
“What do you mean ‘What the fuck?” she hissed at him, “if she saw you, you could have considered yourself…” she started saying, that is until John grabbed the side of her face and landed the most passionate kiss he could produce onto her lips. As much as she enjoyed it, she pushed him away. “What are you doing here, where have you been?” she said, looking into his eyes.
“What am I doing here…?” he repeated, “I’m rescuing you from the geek squad!” he said, with a light chuckle.
“John...” she said standing up, “You abandoned me… and…” she sighed.
“I didn’t abandon you,” he said, standing up, “I was with Magneto; he has so many plans for the future, so many great plans. I’ve been helping him, to make our future better, so we don’t have to hide anymore.” He said, pulling her into a warm embrace. But he tensed up, feeling a bump from under her sweater. When he pulled away, she had tears in her eyes.
“John… I wanted to tell you… but you weren’t here… I didn’t know where you were…” she stammered.
“What…” he growled, “That you got bored when I didn’t come back and got knocked up by some guy? I can’t believe you… I risked my ass to come out here and you…”
“JOHN ALLERDYCE YOU ASSFUCK!” She screamed, “Is it so horrible to imagine that you were the one who got me pregnant.” She said.
“I just….we only….once” he stuttered. He pulled her into another hug, almost crying himself. Falling to his knees and pulling her down with him and kissing her face feverishly. “I’m sorry, I’m an asshole... I shouldn’t have assumed….If I had known, I wouldn’t have left.” He begged. He didn’t receive an answer, she was crying too much into his shoulder to say anything.
The two sat there, for what seemed like hours just holding onto each other. He nuzzled his face into her wet hair, smelling her lavender shampoo. For just a few moments he sat there then pulled away. With his hands on the sides of her face he looked her straight in the eyes, wiping the tears off her cheeks with his thumb he smiled at her.
“Come away with me.” He said simply.
“What?” she choked.
“C’mon….” he whined. “No more classes, no more dirty looks from those typical high school girls….”
“I can’t just leave.” She interrupted. “I have friends here….. I have responsibilities now!” she said motioning down to her swollen abdomen. “I’d rather stay here…. Until its safe for me and our baby.”
He snarled and got up, folding his arms but just standing there for a moment. “Until its safe?”
She nodded smiling. He helped her up, glancing around at the retreating forms running into the woods. He kissed her passionately, holding onto her tightly. “I have to go.”
“Wait… you should stay. Xavier will take you back.”
“You don’t actually believe that. I’m Magneto’s right hand man now. None of the X-geeks will ever look at me in a non violent way again.” He began to walk away but turned again still walking, “I’m sorry… I’ll try to see you soon.” And with that, he disappeared behind the bushes..
I don't know why but the code was acting up