Because you haven't suffered enough...
Story Or Series Title: Fallen Angel
Fandom: Harry Oh NO Not again Potter
Culprit Author's Name: InsanityAmI
Full Name (plus titles if any): Araianne
Full Species(es): Fallen Angel
Hair Color (include adjectives): "long flowing black hair, loosely tied in a plait running down my front to my hips.
Eye Color (include adjectives): "My eyes, once a happy aqua blue, full of life and happiness were now a deep sapphire colour with mournfulness etched deep."
Unusual Markings/Colorations: Angel wings, now coloured black because she's fallen.
Special Possessions (if any):
Annoying Origin: How do you think an angel comes to be?
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: James Potter's guardian angel, now demoted (not through her own fault). Sirius's soulmate.
Annoying Special Abilities: Telepathy, prophecy, and a direct line to the angel Gabriel for help and advice.
Other Annoying Traits: This is the prequel to Lily Black that I reviewed in a previous post that I don't think I've been forgiven for yet.
Oh cripes, this is going to be difficult - there's not a lot of it and it's all so BAD!
Her readmittance to Hogwarts. It looks like she's a regular readmittance there. This is her entry interview with Dumbledore.
"The last time we met you swore you could take care of yourself, why the change of heart?" Typical, he knows good and well why. The asshole.
"Voldermort has grown out of my control, only the Boy in the prophecy can stop him now." (me: plz remember Dumbledore knows nothing of the prophecy yet)
"What prophecy?" Oops. I sighed again
Just like in the sequel, the author keeps jumping from the POV of the main character and others, but as the story is supposed to be written from the POV of the main, she'll preface the jumps with things like "Sirius POV'"
She is, as ever, purely beautiful, enough, in my opinion, to make a Holy Man defy his vow of celibacy. I know her name isn’t Holly. I can tell when a person deceives me. It is partially the reason my parents hate me. They know I am not fully human. I have inherited full swing of my ancestors fallen angel genes. Not only can I tell she is deceiving me; I can tell she is a fallen also.
She has access to a secret room within Hogwarts:
In an attempt to decipher my feelings for my soulmate I climbed the stairs to the one person I could always count on. Godric Gryffindor. Of course he wasn’t in the secret room physically speaking, only his portrait. The room was silver and gold, because, contrary to popular belief, Salazar and Godric were soulmates.
For some reason the earlier children weren't against the rules of Angels. But her fall, as James explained to Sirius:
“An Angel is no longer pure after a vampire bite, but the vampire crumbles to dust, but there was one other reason, another vampire raped Araianne and all I could do was watch. The vampire yet again crumbled and Araianne’s virginity restored, but God still thrust her out of Heaven, for no Angel who knew the so-called pleasure of the flesh could be found pure."
She and Sirius become an item, until late one night she's heading back through the common room and...
That made Araianne stop right in her tracks as she slowly turned to look. There she saw Sirius fucking Lily against the wall. Her eyes let loose several tears as she watched the two orgasm. She wanted terribly to turn away but she couldn’t. She could smell the alcohol on them, but also something else. Araianne felt her heart rip in two as she dropped her book and ran. She kept on running until she could run no further and passed out.
That was how the child was conceived that became the subject of Lily Black.
The author also states at the bottom:
Also I am not making this a Mary Sue on purpose, it’s just angels are classed as perfect beings.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
Fandom: Harry Oh NO Not again Potter
Culprit Author's Name: InsanityAmI
Full Name (plus titles if any): Araianne
Full Species(es): Fallen Angel
Hair Color (include adjectives): "long flowing black hair, loosely tied in a plait running down my front to my hips.
Eye Color (include adjectives): "My eyes, once a happy aqua blue, full of life and happiness were now a deep sapphire colour with mournfulness etched deep."
Unusual Markings/Colorations: Angel wings, now coloured black because she's fallen.
Special Possessions (if any):
Annoying Origin: How do you think an angel comes to be?
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: James Potter's guardian angel, now demoted (not through her own fault). Sirius's soulmate.
Annoying Special Abilities: Telepathy, prophecy, and a direct line to the angel Gabriel for help and advice.
Other Annoying Traits: This is the prequel to Lily Black that I reviewed in a previous post that I don't think I've been forgiven for yet.
Oh cripes, this is going to be difficult - there's not a lot of it and it's all so BAD!
Her readmittance to Hogwarts. It looks like she's a regular readmittance there. This is her entry interview with Dumbledore.
"The last time we met you swore you could take care of yourself, why the change of heart?" Typical, he knows good and well why. The asshole.
"Voldermort has grown out of my control, only the Boy in the prophecy can stop him now." (me: plz remember Dumbledore knows nothing of the prophecy yet)
"What prophecy?" Oops. I sighed again
Just like in the sequel, the author keeps jumping from the POV of the main character and others, but as the story is supposed to be written from the POV of the main, she'll preface the jumps with things like "Sirius POV'"
She is, as ever, purely beautiful, enough, in my opinion, to make a Holy Man defy his vow of celibacy. I know her name isn’t Holly. I can tell when a person deceives me. It is partially the reason my parents hate me. They know I am not fully human. I have inherited full swing of my ancestors fallen angel genes. Not only can I tell she is deceiving me; I can tell she is a fallen also.
She has access to a secret room within Hogwarts:
In an attempt to decipher my feelings for my soulmate I climbed the stairs to the one person I could always count on. Godric Gryffindor. Of course he wasn’t in the secret room physically speaking, only his portrait. The room was silver and gold, because, contrary to popular belief, Salazar and Godric were soulmates.
For some reason the earlier children weren't against the rules of Angels. But her fall, as James explained to Sirius:
“An Angel is no longer pure after a vampire bite, but the vampire crumbles to dust, but there was one other reason, another vampire raped Araianne and all I could do was watch. The vampire yet again crumbled and Araianne’s virginity restored, but God still thrust her out of Heaven, for no Angel who knew the so-called pleasure of the flesh could be found pure."
She and Sirius become an item, until late one night she's heading back through the common room and...
That made Araianne stop right in her tracks as she slowly turned to look. There she saw Sirius fucking Lily against the wall. Her eyes let loose several tears as she watched the two orgasm. She wanted terribly to turn away but she couldn’t. She could smell the alcohol on them, but also something else. Araianne felt her heart rip in two as she dropped her book and ran. She kept on running until she could run no further and passed out.
That was how the child was conceived that became the subject of Lily Black.
The author also states at the bottom:
Also I am not making this a Mary Sue on purpose, it’s just angels are classed as perfect beings.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!