No, this isn't a troll.

Jul 31, 2009 19:43

My first report. Please tell me if I put something inappropriate.

Story Or Series Title: The Life of Legendary Verlon
Fandom: oh gosh -- should I mention all of them? Rurouni Kenshin, Pokemon, Naruto, Teen Titans, Tales of Symphonia... Read the tags.
Culprit Author's Name: Verlon

Full Name (plus titles if any): Verlon
Full Species(es): Questing Stu (Puella centraquestis)
Hair Color (include adjectives): not mentioned
Eye Color (include adjectives): not mentioned
Unusual Markings/Colorations: not mentioned... so far.
Special Possessions (if any): A Zanbatou, Sword and Armor, and Charmander.

Annoying Origin: not mentioned. He was very young when his parents died of disease. He then started living with a traveling swordsman who was a blacksmith as well.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Student of Hiko and apparently knows all canon characters.
Annoying Special Abilities: "You are quick and fierce as lightning."
Other Annoying Traits: Written in poor script, no personality or whatsoever.

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

Verlon spins with his sword toward RS1. The vortex begins from the speed Verlon is Spinning with his Zanbaktou. It pulls RS1 into the vortex. He holds his axe up to block. RS1 goes spinning inside the vortex before he was thrown out side of it. Landing would be the end of him. Aerodactyl catches him in the air.

Verlon: That's it. Charmeleon you want to become stronger and evolve right?
Charmeleon: Char. *nods*
Verlon: K, Good, I think I know how. Protect me so I may cast.
Charmander: Char.

Zerokills slashes with his scythe. RS2 dodging the scythe. Zerokills the slashes with the sword. A scythe / sword combo. RS2 Blocks the sword.
Zerokills slashes with his scythe. RS2 dodging the scythe. Zerokills the slashes with the sword. A scythe / sword combo. RS2 Blocks the sword.
Zerokills slashes with his scythe. RS2 dodging the scythe. Zerokills the slashes with the sword. A scythe / sword combo. RS2 Blocks the sword. Zerokills slashes with the sword . RS2 blocks with the sword.
Zerokills jabs with the scythe into RS2. RS2 flies back away from Zerokills. Nidoking poison needles shoots needles at Pupitar. Pupitar does sandstorm. Verlon disappears in the sandstorm. Verlon raises his hand from the ground as a sword appears floating in thin air.

Verlon: Phantom Blade. I release.

The phantom blade flies toward Aerodactyl. Verlon flips his sword behind him and holds his palm out.

Verlon: Shock Dragon!

A huge electric dragon comes out from his hand flies toward Aerodactyl as well. The dragon swallows and goes through the phantom blade give it electricity. It splits in to for becoming the 4 fangs in the dragon’s mouth. Aerodactyl flies trying to get away from it.

Verlon: Rekozen!

Verlon begins to go around chameleon.

Verlon: When I say blow fire spin.
Charmeleon: Char.

A tornado is formed.

Verlon: NOW!

Charmeleon blows fire spin into the tornado.

Aerodactyl with RS1 riding on is flying around trying to avoid the shock dragon.

I don't what to put up again -- there are too many bad part in it.

tenchu, tales of symphonia, pokemon, teen titans, rurouni kenshin, naruto

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