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Story Or Series Title: I'll find you when I need you No I won't
Fandom: Harry? Whose Harry? Potter
Culprit Author's Name: Broken soul of Moria
Full Name (plus titles if any): Amanda Cutler
Full Species(es): Prophecy! Sue
Hair Color (include adjectives): her hair was a dark purple and black colour that went down to her mid thigh
Eye Color (include adjectives): chocolate brown
Unusual Markings/Colorations: See hair, and she has something on her forehead, but its not fully identified what it is yet.
Special Possessions (if any): A frickin iPod...
Annoying Origin: The Pits of Hell...
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: None Yet...but has Draco's nads...
Annoying Special Abilities: Taught herself magic since she was small, can sing and make Draco go OOC
Other Annoying Traits: Existing...
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
A girl was sitting on the train to Hogwarts.Aren't they all? She was freaked out by the fact that she got accepted to this school. She blinked a few times trying to figure out if this was real or not. She taught herself magic while she lived in her old home. Don't mean to be so logical because she is a Sue, but how is that possible? Considering the Ministry of magic forbids underage witches and wizards practising magic? Oh wait, I forgot, this is a Sue, she probably is SPESHUL! enough to do so. She learned many things As all Sues... but being accepted to this school.. It's just wow for her.
She looked outside seeing the sun shining. Which then at the right moment, the light bouncing off the lake and magnifying from the window, burned out her eye sockets. A small smile crept onto her face. Small smile? She must have a small mouth. She was going to be the first student here at Hogwarts since she was new and going into her sixth year, As typical for all Sues, they ignore the fact that Hogwarts do not accept Transfers...But that's just me. one for being who, and what she was. I wouldn't think so, She is a Sue and therefore banned from Hogwarts, they are still trying to clean off the bloodstains out of Fluffy's fur. Two for needinf protection against Voldemort. And the Spellcheck. Also because of some prophecy that should, well suppose to come true. Another Prophecy!Sue? That's just great...
Amanda's dark chocolate This is by far, the most overused descriptive for brown eyes, come on people, just use the word brown, light brown, or dark brown, for god's sake, if I hear another Sue describes her eyes like that, I'll eat them with a spork! brown eyes searched around, her hair was a dark purple and black colour that went down to her mid thigh. I thought only LOTR!Sues describe thier hair like that...considering the multitude of elves having long hair...heh. She was nicely curved in all the right places *rolls eyes* Naturally..., most of it was from training Training? From what? If she says Quidditch I will scream. so much that's whys he was shaped like an hour glass. Ouch. She couldn't fit through much doors then... She had a nice almond coloured. Coloured what? Skin? Hair? Eyes? Her clothes?! Though she looked pale That is so condraticting. because of her hair.
She thought back to the letter she got from Professor McGonagall. She closed her eyes and thought back to the memory.
Memory Well duh...
Dear,
Miss Amanda Cutler.
We are notpleased to inform you that you have been identifiedchosen as a Sueselected student to attend Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. You will be Terminated on sight by our good friend, The Jackal. He will be by your place by nightfall and will kill you slowly and painfully.placed in sixth year because of your age and the fact that you have studied magic before this. I hope we will see you August twenty third so you can be shown around the school by Mr. Draco Malfoy. Here are the list of items you will need. Hope to not see you there.
Deputy Head Mistress,
Professor McGonagall.
End Memory
Sighing and shaking her head which swung enough force, her neck snapped., she took out her iPod and turned on her music. Good grief, she ignores the timeline, There is no way iPods would exist at this time. It is...1991, and iPods weren't even invented until 2001 I believe...Come on Suethor, use atleast abit of logic. She listened to Tomorrow by Lillix. Again! not until pass the year 2000! While she listened to the beginning of the song she started to sing it. my ears! They burn!
*Snip! Draco is arguing with himself, typical OOCness, hears the Sue and is entranced by her singing like of a Siren.*
Draco watches her and then blinks. [Draco: Oh s**t! A sue!] He knocks on the door waiting for her to open it. When is Draco this polite? He does not knock, he does not do knocking... Or to see if she would even notice him. Again, why even bother? Amanda looked out the compartment and saw the boy looking at her with Grey-Blue eyes. Grey? Blue? Make up your mind Suethor, I don't think Draco appreciates being sue-ified as it is. She blushed dark red and turned off her iPod before opening the door. Which was booby-trapped and shot 10,000 volts of electricity, frying her to a crisp. Draco then came and took out his clone, and went off to go do his usual Canon duties.
"S-sorry about that.. I didn't mean to disturb you" Of course not, considering she was singing outloud and dancing like a maniac...She said quietly as she looked down in embarrassment.
"It's alright. Are you the new girl Amanda HugnkissCutler?"
She just nodded and sat down. She pointed at the seat across from her so he could sit.
"Yes I'm her. Are you Draco Malfoy?"
He nodded and stared at her with interest. *gags* He looked at her forehead and noticed a marking starting to show up. No doubt this SPESHUL! marking will be significant later on... He blinked and as quickly as he saw it, it was gone. Naturally...Apparently it was written on her foreheard with a special ink. Amanda looked at him adn tilted her head to the side. Again, afraid of the Spellcheck.
"You don't look all that mean just like the people in Diagon Alley said you would be." She stated. Well of course not, you knocked out the real Draco, stuffed his body in your closet for your amusement and replaced him with a bad clone... He nodded dumbly. Like I said, Clone! The rest of the train ride was quiet with no one talking while on their way to Hogwarts.
This wasn't too bad, compared to Insane Immortal Dragon Goddess, but still its a Sue. Enjoy...If your into pain..