I'm not much of an Inuyasha fan but...
Story Or Series Title: Knee Deep In History
Fandom: Inuyasha
Culprit Author's Name: spice lily
Full Name (plus titles if any): Serenity and her sister, Hope
Full Species(es): I'm not exactly sure. I think there's at least a bit of Youkai.
Hair Color (include adjectives): Dark brown with "dark blue and ice blue stripes"
Eye Color (include adjectives): "Electric blue"
Unusual Markings/Colorations: "Striped" hair. I'm guessing they mean with streaks, but I can't get the image of a girl with horizontally striped hair out of my head.
Special Possessions (if any): Swords, I think. The story was just too confusing. And lots of clothes.
Annoying Origin: Most probably America
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: They fall into feudal Japan and meet Kagome, Inuyasha, Miroku, Sango, and Sesshoumaru.
Annoying Special Abilities: Serenity can control ice like Frozone from the Incredibles (and it's actually described like that).
Other Annoying Traits: Can go back and forth from world to world through Serenity's closet. They are also rich. Fangirl Japanese.
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
Serenity sat cleaning her closet that was as big as the kitchen (Huge might I add). Even though they were incredibly rich their parents didn’t believe in maids. In the first paragraph, she makes her character incredibly rich. I think this is a new record.
“Stupid closet cleaning. Hey I don’t remember this chest.” Serenity opened it and stuck her head in not thinking as usual. Too far.
Serenity Fell head first into a forest in a clearing. The inevitable happens. A blue light engulfed her. She stuck out her hands and a spray of Ice came out like a slide she made the slope shallower herself before she hit the ground. (Think of Frozone from the Incredibles movie) but, sadly she skidded into a tree.
“Owwwww” she said I think this was an attempt at humor. rubbing her head of waist length dark brown Hair that now had dark blue and ice blue stripes.
She felt something move and it was an ear. She felt where her ears were supposed to be and yelped. Literally. She looked then at her hands and her electric blue eyes filled with worry
“HOPE! HOPE!” She called and a boy who had Silver hair, amber eyes that were an amber-gold mix, fangs, claws and a set of ears like she did now I almost thought Inuyasha was Hope. Fragment. She tried to concentrate on the ice and maybe it would help.
She stuck her arms out and a wall of ice came out cutting them off It was clear so the boy could se her cower almost then go into a defensive position
“I’m glad that I took Karate” She muttered letting the field drop
“Inuyasha who’s this” A raven-haired girl said Serenity could understand her through her accent. He shrugged then said in a language that she presumed was Japanese and judging by the clothes that the silver haired boy wore it was ancient Japanese
“Anata no namae wa han desu ka?” (What is your name?) Actually, that means "Is your name Han?" but it was a good try. Inuyasha asked Serenity raised one eyebrow and stared at him then the girl tried
“I’m Kagome this is Inuyasha what’s your name?”
The rest of the story... *points to icon* Lyuri says it all.
Fandom: Inuyasha
Culprit Author's Name: spice lily
Full Name (plus titles if any): Serenity and her sister, Hope
Full Species(es): I'm not exactly sure. I think there's at least a bit of Youkai.
Hair Color (include adjectives): Dark brown with "dark blue and ice blue stripes"
Eye Color (include adjectives): "Electric blue"
Unusual Markings/Colorations: "Striped" hair. I'm guessing they mean with streaks, but I can't get the image of a girl with horizontally striped hair out of my head.
Special Possessions (if any): Swords, I think. The story was just too confusing. And lots of clothes.
Annoying Origin: Most probably America
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: They fall into feudal Japan and meet Kagome, Inuyasha, Miroku, Sango, and Sesshoumaru.
Annoying Special Abilities: Serenity can control ice like Frozone from the Incredibles (and it's actually described like that).
Other Annoying Traits: Can go back and forth from world to world through Serenity's closet. They are also rich. Fangirl Japanese.
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
Serenity sat cleaning her closet that was as big as the kitchen (Huge might I add). Even though they were incredibly rich their parents didn’t believe in maids. In the first paragraph, she makes her character incredibly rich. I think this is a new record.
“Stupid closet cleaning. Hey I don’t remember this chest.” Serenity opened it and stuck her head in not thinking as usual. Too far.
Serenity Fell head first into a forest in a clearing. The inevitable happens. A blue light engulfed her. She stuck out her hands and a spray of Ice came out like a slide she made the slope shallower herself before she hit the ground. (Think of Frozone from the Incredibles movie) but, sadly she skidded into a tree.
“Owwwww” she said I think this was an attempt at humor. rubbing her head of waist length dark brown Hair that now had dark blue and ice blue stripes.
She felt something move and it was an ear. She felt where her ears were supposed to be and yelped. Literally. She looked then at her hands and her electric blue eyes filled with worry
“HOPE! HOPE!” She called and a boy who had Silver hair, amber eyes that were an amber-gold mix, fangs, claws and a set of ears like she did now I almost thought Inuyasha was Hope. Fragment. She tried to concentrate on the ice and maybe it would help.
She stuck her arms out and a wall of ice came out cutting them off It was clear so the boy could se her cower almost then go into a defensive position
“I’m glad that I took Karate” She muttered letting the field drop
“Inuyasha who’s this” A raven-haired girl said Serenity could understand her through her accent. He shrugged then said in a language that she presumed was Japanese and judging by the clothes that the silver haired boy wore it was ancient Japanese
“Anata no namae wa han desu ka?” (What is your name?) Actually, that means "Is your name Han?" but it was a good try. Inuyasha asked Serenity raised one eyebrow and stared at him then the girl tried
“I’m Kagome this is Inuyasha what’s your name?”
The rest of the story... *points to icon* Lyuri says it all.