Poor Kaiba.

[lethe_seraph]

First-time poster... am I doing anything wrong?

Story Or Series Title: My friend, maybe more
Fandom: Yu-Gi-Oh!
Culprit Author's Name: i-am-gamer-hear-me-roar

Full Name (plus titles if any): Meg (her "self apointed nick-name")
Full Species(es): Human. I fear for the race.
Hair Color (include adjectives): "long firey red hair"
Eye Color (include

Comments

[sharkcowsheep]

Way-ull, how about that. The story's gone already!

[nekobutt]

Wow, that didn't take long at ALL.

The story, by the way is AWFUL! I guess I just haven't been in here often enough, but this is a bad one (from what you've posted here). The comments made me laugh though. xD

[eralkfang]

Why would Malik be in that anyways? It's probably after Duel Tower, and the Ishtars have gone back to Egypt... get yer timeline straight, Sue author!

But, yay, it's gone!

[rosehiptea]

I hate to comment on a fandom I'm not in and a story that's already gone... but I SO hate when someone writes direct bashing into a story and admits it straight out. It's just so cheap. Even if I don't like the character either I don't want to read garbage like that.

[vyctori]

"Pail/ivory skin," huh? Usually using slashes in the middle of description would set me off ranting, but somehow, because she describes her skin as bucket-like, it's just fine. *grins*

" 3:45 p.m," he said aloud, rubbing his eyes with his index finger and thumb. " Maybe Meg's still awake.

They're vampires! They can't stay awake throughout the day! Aaaaaah!

The "author" sure liked her punctuation, though, considering the excess apostrophes and commas. I suppose it makes a nice change from the usual lack. But it's gone, so no need to worry anymore. Rest in pieces. *bows head mock-solemnly*

[roflskate]

Why on Earth would there be MALIK bashing in a Kaiba/OC Mary Sue story. The two barely interact

What the hey?

[widowblade]

Probably used as a plot device to get Kaiba and the sue together -_-; wouldn't be surprising if she was going to have Malik trying to rape her (sue) later -_-;