"Proffer" X? Sounds like some kind of medicine...
Story Or Series Title: Huntress
Fandom: X-Men: Evolution
Culprit Author's Name: Cbyer
Full Name: K.i.t. (yeah, with the periods.)/Huntress
Full Species(es): "Muntent" *sporks herself in the eye*
Hair Color (include adjectives): Dirty blonde
Eye Color (include adjectives): Not mentioned
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None
Special Possessions (if any): The plot and personalities of the canon characters, which the Sueauthor is holding for ransome in her closet.
Annoying Origin: Er... the woods, or at least that's what I can make from the story. Scott finds her in the woods and drags her back to the Institute while Kitty and Kurt try to get to know her.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: She has a history with Logan, but it's way more angsty and tramatizing than his.
Annoying Special Abilities: The ability to confuse herself with her own words and to snark off to the "Proffer" without having her brain melted. She's also waaay to powerful for the "Proffer" to read her mind.
Other Annoying Traits: If someone has the idea to kill off the Sue, a chain reaction will set off somewhere and detonate a nuclear bomb. (WTF?!)
*snerk* Logan calls her a "hlf-paint" in chapter two... *laughs*
This author is either- A. Ten years old, or B. Not an educated U.S. citizen. I can't find any other reason for the junk that's behind the lj cut.
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
Kitty and Kurt was sitting on top of Scott's car wait for him to show up. "Whaz take so long?" Kurt voices the option of them. Scott come running up and whiz out" Le go I think I lost her." Pluzzed kitty go" Like lost Who?'" A girl walks up. She was a tall girl with a short dirty blonde hair. "Can I hitch a ride?" In an even flat tone.
Before Scott could say anything Kurt burst out" Sure." She graceful hops into the back of the car join in by kitty. " SO are you new here at bayvile?" Hope to find out some thing about her. The girl look at kitty deiced her words very careful "I assume it the superlative way to descry it." Her word is as confuse as she herself is. What does superlative mean any way? Uneasy silent fill set after that.
On reach the mansion Scott not very harmly says" You can't stay long." Oh really" says this mrtery girl you puissance discovery I may be nearby more then you like." Sissy like a snake the soft air. " I just want a word with your proffers. As she walk up. Kurt ask Scotts "Whaz your problem?" Scot scow back" she was following me"
"Kitty can you show me where proffer office is?" Kitty does what she ask awhile she ask the proffer Proffer there some one here to see you. Who is it?
I don't know, won't give a name.
Bring her in I'm in a meeting with Logan and storm.
The girl walk in with kitty is at her heels. She turns round" Thank but I don't need any help from here." Kitty look at the proffers then walks out.
The proffers go" Who want to see me?"
Point of view of girl
I feel that that the pointless question, well ask a stupid question get a stupid answer" I want to enroll into your insinuate."
"Well" the proffer start" this school have very high strand for it students, I don't think you have it."
Point of view of the proffer
Oh, really! How do you know I 'am not a muntent? After all this a school for muntet is it?"
The girl counted, I am danmit, and if you don't help me who Will?
Fandom: X-Men: Evolution
Culprit Author's Name: Cbyer
Full Name: K.i.t. (yeah, with the periods.)/Huntress
Full Species(es): "Muntent" *sporks herself in the eye*
Hair Color (include adjectives): Dirty blonde
Eye Color (include adjectives): Not mentioned
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None
Special Possessions (if any): The plot and personalities of the canon characters, which the Sueauthor is holding for ransome in her closet.
Annoying Origin: Er... the woods, or at least that's what I can make from the story. Scott finds her in the woods and drags her back to the Institute while Kitty and Kurt try to get to know her.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: She has a history with Logan, but it's way more angsty and tramatizing than his.
Annoying Special Abilities: The ability to confuse herself with her own words and to snark off to the "Proffer" without having her brain melted. She's also waaay to powerful for the "Proffer" to read her mind.
Other Annoying Traits: If someone has the idea to kill off the Sue, a chain reaction will set off somewhere and detonate a nuclear bomb. (WTF?!)
*snerk* Logan calls her a "hlf-paint" in chapter two... *laughs*
This author is either- A. Ten years old, or B. Not an educated U.S. citizen. I can't find any other reason for the junk that's behind the lj cut.
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
Kitty and Kurt was sitting on top of Scott's car wait for him to show up. "Whaz take so long?" Kurt voices the option of them. Scott come running up and whiz out" Le go I think I lost her." Pluzzed kitty go" Like lost Who?'" A girl walks up. She was a tall girl with a short dirty blonde hair. "Can I hitch a ride?" In an even flat tone.
Before Scott could say anything Kurt burst out" Sure." She graceful hops into the back of the car join in by kitty. " SO are you new here at bayvile?" Hope to find out some thing about her. The girl look at kitty deiced her words very careful "I assume it the superlative way to descry it." Her word is as confuse as she herself is. What does superlative mean any way? Uneasy silent fill set after that.
On reach the mansion Scott not very harmly says" You can't stay long." Oh really" says this mrtery girl you puissance discovery I may be nearby more then you like." Sissy like a snake the soft air. " I just want a word with your proffers. As she walk up. Kurt ask Scotts "Whaz your problem?" Scot scow back" she was following me"
"Kitty can you show me where proffer office is?" Kitty does what she ask awhile she ask the proffer Proffer there some one here to see you. Who is it?
I don't know, won't give a name.
Bring her in I'm in a meeting with Logan and storm.
The girl walk in with kitty is at her heels. She turns round" Thank but I don't need any help from here." Kitty look at the proffers then walks out.
The proffers go" Who want to see me?"
Point of view of girl
I feel that that the pointless question, well ask a stupid question get a stupid answer" I want to enroll into your insinuate."
"Well" the proffer start" this school have very high strand for it students, I don't think you have it."
Point of view of the proffer
Oh, really! How do you know I 'am not a muntent? After all this a school for muntet is it?"
The girl counted, I am danmit, and if you don't help me who Will?