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Been writting a lot today, and I noticed something. I have trouble mixing dialogue with narration!! I mean, I write good dialogue, and I think I like my narration, but those little conections and descriptive phrases I'm supposed to place in between dialogue? Yeah, I never know when or where to put them. So my fic kinda reads like a full narration interrupted by bits of a play.
Not good, right?? *sigh* At least I noticed. How do I fix it????
Also, for this part of my fic, I was listening to Alanis Morrissete's "Uninvited" on a loop. Cheery times, really!! XD And now I kinda wanna watch "City of Angels" again and cry my heart out.
Edit: AND I HAVE OVER 1600 WORDS ALREADY!!!! *jumps around excitedly* I may make the deadline just yet!!
Btw, I kinda love writting for Zach. He's such a bastard.
Not good, right?? *sigh* At least I noticed. How do I fix it????
Also, for this part of my fic, I was listening to Alanis Morrissete's "Uninvited" on a loop. Cheery times, really!! XD And now I kinda wanna watch "City of Angels" again and cry my heart out.
Edit: AND I HAVE OVER 1600 WORDS ALREADY!!!! *jumps around excitedly* I may make the deadline just yet!!
Btw, I kinda love writting for Zach. He's such a bastard.