I love all the characters you've posted thus far. Really great style for a comic. They look easy to move and very expressionistic. Fantastic. Love Caseys's red electronic eye. Great that it has a back-story, as well.
I love them both, but I must critique Chris's left are (our right). I can defiantly see the way it's supposed to be turned, but I think it's a little unnatural for the way she's standing. See, I don't think he elbow would be able to turn quite that far. (Give me a break - I'm actually standing and trying this.) Also, (and I know it's a comic so it's not perfectly real-like) I might suggest having her shirt bunch up where her hands are on her waist. I can tell she's a girl under the clothes, but it'd be easier to spot (not to mention more accurate) if you could see how baggy the clothes are, you know? I also think that, with the angle at which she's standing, that arm should be a little shorter, a little more hidden by her torso. Hopefully I don't sound picky. Just some things I noticed.
Anyway, great work. ^^ Can't wait to see the others.
I love all the characters you've posted thus far. Really great style for a comic. They look easy to move and very expressionistic. Fantastic. Love Caseys's red electronic eye. Great that it has a back-story, as well.
I love them both, but I must critique Chris's left are (our right). I can defiantly see the way it's supposed to be turned, but I think it's a little unnatural for the way she's standing. See, I don't think he elbow would be able to turn quite that far. (Give me a break - I'm actually standing and trying this.) Also, (and I know it's a comic so it's not perfectly real-like) I might suggest having her shirt bunch up where her hands are on her waist. I can tell she's a girl under the clothes, but it'd be easier to spot (not to mention more accurate) if you could see how baggy the clothes are, you know? I also think that, with the angle at which she's standing, that arm should be a little shorter, a little more hidden by her torso. Hopefully I don't sound picky. Just some things I noticed.
Anyway, great work. ^^ Can't wait to see the others.
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