Comments | martinicruiser: So many bunnies, not enough hands! (And keyboards!)

vejiraziel in martinicruiser

So many bunnies, not enough hands! (And keyboards!)

Feb 10, 2008 04:08

Title: Infiltrating the Datsun Club ( Read more... )

hound, smokescreen, prowl, fan fiction, jazz, prowlxjazz, mirage, bluestreak

Comments 20

whisperinsummer February 10 2008, 12:54:54 UTC

So cute! Funny too. The datsun brother...

Next time, I'm gonna write a fic about this pairing. <3 ProwlxJazz

vejiraziel February 10 2008, 23:41:27 UTC

Yeeeesss, more Prowl x Jazz for ze world

cheysulinight February 10 2008, 17:37:23 UTC

Wonder how hard it was for Bluestreak and Prowl to not laugh at 'miniature' Smokescreen. And shame on you, Smokescreen, teasing your little brother. He will get you back, you know.

Loved it!

vejiraziel February 10 2008, 23:42:26 UTC

Bluestreak was probably having the hardest time to keep a straight face, and oh yes, Prowl will have his revenge >:3

Glad you liked it!

mmouse15 February 10 2008, 22:33:38 UTC

Oh, that was nice. I like that Smokescreen and Bluestreak were plotting to get Prowl and Jazz together *rubs hands* good job, fellows!

Very funny how Jazz got caught - that was sweet and funny and perfectly done.

Thanks for sharing, Veji!

vejiraziel February 10 2008, 23:43:07 UTC

Thanks for reading >w<

Yesss, I like it when Jazz is the one that gets caught by someone else's plot. Mwahaha. XD;

artemischan February 11 2008, 01:26:19 UTC

I freaking love this. Seriously! I can totally see the Prowl-Blue-Smokey brother thing, and this was just adorable. <3

vejiraziel February 11 2008, 01:33:23 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! XD

artemischan February 11 2008, 01:38:07 UTC

More than welcome, darling. ^_^ Glad to give my support, that's all.

vejiraziel February 11 2008, 01:48:37 UTC

And all the support is very much appreciated. XD

kyra_neko_rei February 11 2008, 01:48:15 UTC

Hmmmm . . . never heard of Smokescreen before, definitely interesting premise; very cute, especially the part where Prowl's brothers spilled the beans about his crush ("Traitors." LOL!)

This doorwing-conversation concept is lovely to imagine, btw. You win at creativity and cuteness!

vejiraziel February 11 2008, 01:52:09 UTC

His Alternators version is in the icon I'm currently using. But he's basicaly another Datsun. He appeared in season 2 in G1 XD I like to make him either Prowl's and Bluestreak's father in a Nameless AU of mine or as the older brother, since his cartoon design shows the most differences amongt he three Datsuns.

>w> I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reading!