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vejiraziel in martinicruiser

Look ma! I ficced!

Sep 09, 2011 17:27

Title: From Within
Week: 1
Prompt: "Surprising Origin"
Verse: G1 (?)
Rating: PG-13
Words: N/A
Warnings: Deaths and implications of violence.
Summary: His life was both a lie but also true.
Notes: For the Prowl x Jazz Anniversary challenge @ prowlxjazz. Happy Anniversary to all in the pxj community, here's to many more to come.

( Cry without tears, see without sight, night without day and every day's black as the night. Fly without wings, feel without touch, touch without feel and everywhere nothing is real! I wanna see from within. I wanna be where I've been. I want a truth not a lie! I want to live 'fore I die! )

prowlxjazz, au, pxj challenges: september 11

Comments 13

wicked3659 September 9 2011, 22:37:09 UTC

This is very dark. I only wonder what the real Prowl would have been like. Nice fic, hoping to see more. :3

vejiraziel September 9 2011, 22:38:56 UTC

Thankies :B I hoped the origin would be surprising enough. XD<3

fianna9 September 9 2011, 23:17:40 UTC

Very dark, very good and very well written. The idea of "that" Prowl being in the G1 world is creepy yet entirely plausible. It would be interesting to see what happens later on, especially with his attraction to Jazz.

vejiraziel September 9 2011, 23:30:31 UTC

I thought that would make for a very surprising origin, that the Prowl we know and love could actually be his shattered glass counterpart instead.

prowlsgirl September 10 2011, 00:50:15 UTC

Wow so Prowl come the Shatter Glass universe? That's why he never is showed in the comic? That's an interesting idea.

vejiraziel September 10 2011, 01:03:54 UTC

In this fic yes, that's the idea. :)

usagi_atemu_tom September 10 2011, 02:56:13 UTC

Wow, a nice twist. First I was really wondering where Prowl might come from. Only later it clicked, the originally missing optics. I've read about that not too long ago (was it not a describtion about one of your fanarts?), that's the main reason it was still in my memory ( ... )

renegadewriter8 September 10 2011, 03:06:53 UTC

Wow that caught me by surprise! Great job I wonder what happened to the other Prowl.

vejiraziel September 10 2011, 07:13:32 UTC

He was never 'born'. SG!Prowl killed his creators before they could even create his spark.