Comments | martinicruiser: To kickstart the week...

vejiraziel in martinicruiser

To kickstart the week...

Nov 15, 2009 23:15

Title: Sparkless. (24 ( Read more... )

2007verse, sparkless, prowlxjazz, au

Comments 20

wildphoenix6 November 16 2009, 05:24:34 UTC

**Sniff** Poor Prowl. Hopefully he will get the hint. Very good chapter.

snugsbunny November 16 2009, 05:34:14 UTC

Wonderful chapter sweets. This really was a gripping and intense instalment.

I loved the way Trax led Prowl to admit to himself the truths he had always known, but never acknowledged.

It was also sad for both of them. Prowl's past with his bondmate and what his mate did to Prowl and their unborn sparkling. And for Trax in admitting what Beat did to him, friends and herself during her life.

I'm glad that Prowl has found a conclusion to this, and is willing to find out Jazz's decsion XDD

Can't wait for the next chapter sweetspark <3

*cuddles and luffs* ♥

vejiraziel November 23 2009, 02:34:36 UTC

*playing catching up with these comments*

I think Trax suffered a lot because of his daughter, mainly because he loved the daugther she was before she became adult and began to take bad decisions.

X3 Next chapter is-a coming!

*cuddles and luffs*<3

mirage_shinkiro November 16 2009, 06:03:59 UTC

A powerful and intense chapter as Prowl realizes and accepts the truth and gets a more realistic view of himself/his situation. It's good to see that he listened to Trax well enough to let Jazz's opinion count. Of course, that puts the burden of reconciliation on Jazz now, so I can only hope that Prowl will be more open when Jazz makes his attempt (as, of course, I hope he does).

vejiraziel November 23 2009, 02:33:17 UTC

Sometimes it's as hard to accept things aren't always one's fault as it is to accept our faults. Well, things will get interesting for Prowl and Jazz in the next chapter.

prancingtiger86 November 16 2009, 08:34:41 UTC

That was an incredibly tense chapter with Trax leading Prowl to realise that not eveything was his fault, and for him to finally find a small measure of peace with himself. loved it and now I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

swift117 November 16 2009, 09:32:46 UTC

Ahh the Lord Trax intervenes!! He's like a sire to Prowl. An old, seasoned mech who cares for him. That must be new for Prowl.

Feels good to have friends to smooth out raw edges. Like self-loathing and wrong words.

Glad you update so regularly. Im waiting mondays for it.