Comments | martinicruiser: Okay, so I finished before I went to bed.

vejiraziel in martinicruiser

Okay, so I finished before I went to bed.

Aug 01, 2008 05:35

Title: What You Don't Know ( Read more... )

prowlxjazz, jazz, imperium cybertronium, nc-17, prowl

Comments 26

__wilderness__ August 1 2008, 11:05:15 UTC

*flail*

Aaii! They need to tell each other!! And then it can be all shiny!

Not that I'm completely enjoying watching them being uncomfortable around one another! *grins*

vejiraziel August 1 2008, 20:53:20 UTC

They'll tell each other... eventually. At least Prowl is determined now to tell Jazz what he feels! *shifty eyes*

Thanks for reading!

ex_naggingf August 1 2008, 13:30:31 UTC

Oh thank you! That was marvelous! Now I can't wait for Jazz to discover the red triangle too ;)

vejiraziel August 1 2008, 20:55:55 UTC

Jazz is going to have sooo much fun with that triangle when he finds out about it. Glad you liked it, thanks for reading!

gundamangel August 1 2008, 13:34:24 UTC

It's like watching a car crash. You know it's coming, but you can't look away. And when it does happen you just want to scream "YOU'RE AN IDOIT!!"
Jazz is right there in front of Prowl, but he won't say anything. And Jazz could have Prowl, he's right there waiting for him, but no. Both of them are idiots.
This chapter was great by the way.

vejiraziel August 1 2008, 21:17:24 UTC

Prowl's an insecure bot and Jazz is just afraid Prowl doesn't like him that way. XD Fear not, these two are getting closer to getting together like Primus commands.

jaxink August 1 2008, 13:38:56 UTC

I'm sitting here completely wide-eyed with tingles all over my body. Don't they recognize the sexual tension that's practically smothering them in the room?! That was amazingly hot.

*grabs Prowl's hand and Jazz's hand* Come here both of you. Now, sit down on this berth, admit your undying love, and get on with overloading until your processors explode. XD

ishimura August 1 2008, 15:01:45 UTC

Sorry, but I have to second the last part! XD *giggles madly*

vejiraziel August 1 2008, 23:10:10 UTC

XDD They're getting there, don't worry~

vejiraziel August 1 2008, 23:09:29 UTC

XDD They're getting there. They're getting there~ I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!

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dark_daebereth August 1 2008, 16:02:04 UTC

-remembers to close opened mouth-

That was nothing short of delicious. And yet... so close, so damn far. Come ON boys!

vejiraziel August 1 2008, 21:09:02 UTC

XDD It's getting closer~ At least Prowl is going to take the first step somewhat soon. e.e;;a