Control [Snapshot #2]

Aug 21, 2008 10:02

Title: Control [Snapshot #2]
Author: radiantbaby
Characters/Pairings: Dr. John/Martha [Note: Dr. John was a David Tennant character in the “Reproduction” episode of “Love in the 21st Century”]
Word Count: 5357 [in Word]
Genre: AU, fluffy, schmoopy smut, with a big heaping side of angst
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Post-S3 Doctor Who, Post-S2 Torchwood’s "Reset ( Read more... )

pr0n, dr john, martha/john, fic, martha jones

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persiflage_1 August 21 2008, 14:16:59 UTC
I believe I'm melting into a puddle over here...

I lurve this so much! I love the way John's all grumpy and Martha's so understanding and then teases him into a better frame of mind.

*snuggles John and Martha*

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radiantbaby August 21 2008, 17:32:42 UTC
I believe I'm melting into a puddle over here...

Oh no! Not again! (I'll keep the cat away this time!)

I lurve this so much! I love the way John's all grumpy and Martha's so understanding and then teases him into a better frame of mind.

I'm so glad you liked it!

I felt a bit sorry for Martha in the beginning. Both of my parents decided to quit smoking (cold turkey, no less!) at the same time when I was about 12 and I tell you -- it was not a fun time! Even my mother (who is usually quiet and sweet) was a terror! O_o

Anyway, I also liked that Martha took things into her own hands and made things better between them -- in a very delicious way, too! :)

*snuggles John and Martha*

Hee! They are quite snuggly!

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persiflage_1 August 21 2008, 17:40:36 UTC
Oh no! Not again! (I'll keep the cat away this time!)

I appreciate that!

I'm so glad you liked it!

I felt a bit sorry for Martha in the beginning. Both of my parents decided to quit smoking (cold turkey, no less!) at the same time when I was about 12 and I tell you -- it was not a fun time! Even my mother (who is usually quiet and sweet) was a terror! O_o

My Dad started cutting down, and then suddenly went cold turkey. Fortunately I wasn't around at the time as I was here in Oxford doing my first degree so I missed the trauma!

Anyway, I also liked that Martha took things into her own hands and made things better between them -- in a very delicious way, too! :)

Yes!!! But that's Martha - she's so sensuous...

Hee! They are quite snuggly!

Definitely!

By the way, I've tried to fix my banner issue on my LJ, so if you get a minute, could you hop over in non-IE mode and take a look for me please?

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radiantbaby August 21 2008, 20:09:34 UTC
By the way, I've tried to fix my banner issue on my LJ, so if you get a minute, could you hop over in non-IE mode and take a look for me please?

Hey, good news! Not only is your banner showing up, but your colors are fixed! Don't ask me how, but there you go! :)

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jadekirk August 21 2008, 14:46:27 UTC
I love it. I love John's grumpiness and Martha's panic about the Pharm. Another brilliant chapter.

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radiantbaby August 21 2008, 17:37:12 UTC
Thanks so much! I am so glad that you liked it!

John was really a grumpy-grump, wasn't he? LOL!

I was glad to have the opportunity to show a different side of him (I really worry that he comes off as too ideal sometimes), though, as well as being able to show some emotional repercussions in Martha about her experiences with things like the Pharm.

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angelfireeast August 21 2008, 15:50:37 UTC
That was...simply...I don't have words - it's too amazing! It's just so hot and the emotions are perfect! I love the whole "perfect John" bit, how afraid he is of driving her away. I just love everything about it. Thank you so much *hugs*

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radiantbaby August 21 2008, 17:44:45 UTC
I am so happy that you enjoyed it! I was so nervous that I wouldn't fulfill your prompt well enough! :)

P.S. Like a dork, when I first posted the fanmix, I was in such a rush that I managed to forget to credit you for the pictures -- I did edit that though if you saw the post before I fixed it. *smacks forehead*

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angelfireeast August 21 2008, 19:09:47 UTC
You really did fulfill my prompt perfectly:D You are truly a master writer:D

No worries:D

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radiantbaby August 21 2008, 20:35:51 UTC
Hooray! :)

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Re: Loved this radiantbaby August 21 2008, 17:52:20 UTC
I love that "Secret Smile" filthy clip! Brendan is just so dark and naughty -- have you ever seen "Secret Smile"? It's got a bit of a cheesy "Lifetime" channel-esque feel to it ("Oh, the perils of dating a stalker!"), but it's still good for a laugh and -- on a purely shallow note -- David looks damned good in it.

I did actually use a "Secret Smile" sound clip in the fanmix and, as a joke, I actually considered the famous "filthy line," but it is so heavily associated with Brendan that I didn't think it would work right.

Don't worry about being long-winded -- I am just happy that you are still enjoying the series! After the last fic got so few responses, I honestly worried that people were starting to get bored with John/Martha stories!

Oh, and you'll be happy to know that I've already started on another story (this one is John/Ten) and hope to have that done in the next week or so (I'm about to be out of town next week, so I'll do my best!).

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Re: Loved this radiantbaby August 21 2008, 20:30:37 UTC
Oh my Lord! A John/Ten fic... I just about swooned right there, and I NEVER swoon... I will be waiting on baited breath.

Hee! Well, I hope that you like it. It will based on ebbyzone's prompt here and I've already got a little bit of it written. For a meme recently, I even posted this excerpt from the beginning (here it is to whet your appetite):
Brown eyes met brown - both deep, both searching, both filled with a surprising recognition of kindred souls within the universe -

The Doctor almost felt sparks against his fingertips as they pressed delicately - intimately - against John’s temples. The rush of climax had synced them together, their thoughts and feelings interlaced and their souls touching in the darkness as their bodies moved against one another.

"Always running," the Doctor whispered.

"Always," John replied.

And as soon as it was there, the connection broke just as quickly - walls rising harshly to protect against secrets and any other bombardments pulling up deeply buried feelings from the past.It's tentatively titled " ( ... )

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radiantbaby August 21 2008, 17:54:15 UTC
It is a great banner, isn't it? She'd sent it to me as part of her prompt and even though "John"'s hair is a bit long in it (which I touched on in the story), I thought it was perfect to write about since both David and Freema look so divine!

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