Comments | marshmallowhobo: FANFICTION : QUINN/RACHEL : "HOUSE MADE OF PAPER" : PROLOGUE PART V : PG

marshmallowhobo

FANFICTION : QUINN/RACHEL : "HOUSE MADE OF PAPER" : PROLOGUE PART V : PG

Aug 07, 2010 01:59

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fanfic, glee, quinn/rachel

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mrtoulouse August 7 2010, 01:47:34 UTC

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let_me_stop August 7 2010, 02:31:03 UTC

A new chapter! :DDDD <--- my face... well, if I had like four mouths, that would be my face. But you get it.

I'm just so insanely happy that you posted more that I gave myself four mouths.

mjacton August 7 2010, 17:57:07 UTC

So glad this is back! This is really good!

zanthlay August 10 2010, 14:04:11 UTC

I'm so glad you updated - I'm loving this. And I'll make sure to tell you if I find your muse. (How dare your muse go on holidays and leave you in the lurch!) I hope you're feeling less stressed soon. *hugs*

I like the hints at Quinn being pregnant, although Puck's behaviour sounds nausea-inducing. The bits you have into Quinn and Santana's friendship are great - we don't get enough of that in the show. And I love that Quinn was watching Rachel's "deplorable brown eyes" so intently.

I'm looking forward to seeing how you interpret Quinn's reaction to the face-off with Dakota Stanley. (I've always found what she said to Sue afterwards very revealing, and I'm sure I'm not the only one.)