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mars_assassins

Chapter Fifty-Eight, 3489 words

Aug 12, 2006 22:54

( Chapter Fifty-Eight )

Comments 40

rosaleendhu August 13 2006, 00:35:51 UTC

Wah! *cuddles Crawford* I really didn't expect it to work out that way!

mars_assassins August 13 2006, 08:23:27 UTC

Poor Crawford - he didn't expect it either . . .

dormouse_in_tea August 13 2006, 03:05:53 UTC

Oh dear. What a MESS.

mars_assassins August 13 2006, 08:14:19 UTC

Yes - and it's not helping Schuldig's guilty feelings at all . . .

dormouse_in_tea August 13 2006, 09:36:15 UTC

. . . you do know which of my strings to pull, wench.

I am sympathetic at the moment towards all of them, but if Crawford doesn't straighten up and help Schuldig soon....

mars_assassins August 13 2006, 09:54:52 UTC

Mua-ha-ha!

It hasn't yet crossed Schuldig's mind that killing Micah+Crawford freaking out+Crawford unable to forgive himself (and/or Schuldig) may = breaking up. A freakout of massive telepathic screwed up proportions could occur in such circumstances.

Farfarello will hit them both over the head before anything REALLY unforgiveable can be said.

gildedlie August 13 2006, 04:16:17 UTC

oh dear... poor Crawford!

But, on the other hand, Farfarello for the WIN! I like how you write him.

mars_assassins August 13 2006, 08:13:32 UTC

Poor Crawford indeed. He's very confused and miserable right now.

Farfarello's not confused at all, though. And he's not taking any nonsense from anyone.

puddingcat August 13 2006, 11:46:04 UTC

*Waves cheerleading pompoms*

Farfarello, he's our man,
If he can't do it -
We're well & truly screwed...

sbluerazchoccie August 13 2006, 05:05:24 UTC

This is so sad, and very touching. I am very glad that they aren't Weiss and can cry on each other's shoulders. I still can't help noticing that Crawford has not become lost in the desert, which makes me very, very nervous.

I have finally fallen to the lure of writing fanfic. WK fanfic, actually. I was wondering if I could prevail upon you to look over the first chapter, as you know much, much more about the series than I do. *grovels shamelessly*
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mars_assassins August 13 2006, 08:05:52 UTC

Poor Crawford, he's all mixed up. And not in the good way that Schuldig can do for him. He's feeling pretty lost right now, though

And sure, send it along, I'd be glad to look it over!

sbluerazchoccie August 13 2006, 11:06:18 UTC

A million thanks! May silver teaspoons shine upon your camels!
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snabel August 13 2006, 08:50:44 UTC

I hate funerals. The scene was very touching, though. It won't be easy for them to move on. . . Farfarello and Schuldig killed Crawford`s brother - poor Schuldig, it will take some time for Crawford to get over it. He WILL get over it, won't he?

mars_assassins August 13 2006, 09:44:06 UTC

Crawford's rather messed up right at the moment, and feeling unaccustomedly guilty at being messed up, which isn't helping the situation.

He WILL get over it, won't he?

. . . maybe . . .