‘Look at what you’ve done.’ Max held her breath, her body stiffened when he took one step closer before slipping his hand in hers, holding it tight. Her head lifted towards his at the smile in his words. He was happy. It was apparent from the curve of his lips, the way he was holding himself, that light in his blue eyes. Max however, was beyond terrified. Her hand in his latex grasp was sweating, her heart tripping over their haste to leave her chest. What had she done
Oooo, lovely flashback and nice insight into Max’s thought and (don’t know of it was intential) but a good analysis of what is wrong with Logan, he sees everything in black and white, heroism, standing up for the meek etc etc and never takes into account the fear Max and people like her must be feeling
Her eyes skittered over the expectations in their eyes, searching for someone. Needing desperately on his reassurance. But he wasn’t there. Surrounded by people left and right, Max felt the cold claw of loneliness sank in. Eeee, I’m really hoping she was looking for
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Her eyes skittered over the expectations in their eyes, searching for someone. Needing desperately on his reassurance. But he wasn’t there. Surrounded by people left and right, Max felt the cold claw of loneliness sank in. Eeee, I’m really hoping she was looking for Alec here :) Yes! haha She needs him, but she's too stubborn to admit it :P And yeah, since she considers all transgenic a part of her family, she trusts them all. Under all that leather, I think Max is a bit naive in her opinion on family related subjects.
Thank you for the review :) I'm more of a DA writer actually. All of my work are mostly DA and this is my first venture into the SPN world. I know the brothers are not fully utilized (so to speak) but I'm hoping to change it in the next few chaps :) But again, thank you for the review and your thoughts, I really appreciate it!
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Max held her breath, her body stiffened when he took one step closer before slipping his hand in hers, holding it tight. Her head lifted towards his at the smile in his words. He was happy. It was apparent from the curve of his lips, the way he was holding himself, that light in his blue eyes.
Max however, was beyond terrified.
Her hand in his latex grasp was sweating, her heart tripping over their haste to leave her chest. What had she done
Oooo, lovely flashback and nice insight into Max’s thought and (don’t know of it was intential) but a good analysis of what is wrong with Logan, he sees everything in black and white, heroism, standing up for the meek etc etc and never takes into account the fear Max and people like her must be feeling
Her eyes skittered over the expectations in their eyes, searching for someone. Needing desperately on his reassurance. But he wasn’t there.
Surrounded by people left and right, Max felt the cold claw of loneliness sank in.
Eeee, I’m really hoping she was looking for ( ... )
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Surrounded by people left and right, Max felt the cold claw of loneliness sank in.
Eeee, I’m really hoping she was looking for Alec here :)
Yes! haha She needs him, but she's too stubborn to admit it :P And yeah, since she considers all transgenic a part of her family, she trusts them all. Under all that leather, I think Max is a bit naive in her opinion on family related subjects.
Thank you for the review :) I'm more of a DA writer actually. All of my work are mostly DA and this is my first venture into the SPN world. I know the brothers are not fully utilized (so to speak) but I'm hoping to change it in the next few chaps :) But again, thank you for the review and your thoughts, I really appreciate it!
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