Eight and Eighth--Chapter 13

[marmaladefever]

 Title: Eight and Eighth
Author: Marmalade Fever
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Hermione Granger, and more.
Genres: Romance, Drama, weird combo of in-Hogwarts and post-Hogwarts, and Humor.  I can't write a fanfic without humor leaking its way in.
Spoilers: DH (though no epilogue)
Overall Rating: PG-13
Summary: Up from the ashes of seventh year grow the roses

Comments

[strawberrimelon]

Lol! I was totally imagaining Pride and Prejudice throughout the whole thing. I remember the stupid times in PE...gosh, I hated those guy with the clammy hands. So gross! :)))
Great chapter. XD

[marmaladefever]

I'm glad I'm not the only one who did square-dancing. lol

It sounds like a lot of my readers were thinking Pride and Prejudice. :)

[tierfal]

"If she didn’t know any better, she’d say that on some very surreal level of reality, Malfoy was flirting with her, and she was turning into a tingly pile of goo because of it."

was composed and constructed of win. 8D

I need to go add this story to my FF.net favorites right now, I have realized, and shame on me for not having done it before...

[marmaladefever]

*giggle* Good line, eh? *giggle*

I likes the favorites lists. :D (If I didn't, I probably wouldn't keep a count on my profile.)

*hugs you for the heck of it*

[tierfal]

Fantastic! 8D

I love clicking on the "Stats" button on my FF.net page. For some reason, it gives me disproportionate joy to see all the numbers. :P

*hugs you, too!!*

[antipasto]

Wouldn’t it be nice if she sneezed on her hand? Then maybe he wouldn’t want to hold it in the future.

*laughs* Now that's a good excuse for NOT holding some gross guy's hand...but, Hermione, dear? Draco Malfoy is not some icky boy that needs to be ran away from! Someone really needs to tell her that. Greengrass again, perhaps?

Ah! I was thinking that the dance (with all the the arches of hands and arms) would be reminiscent of the dances from the P&P era. I guess those witches and wizards are still quite, um, nonmodern(?) and would be doing practices that were over several centuries ago lol.

Even though I consider it the longest chapter you've had yet, I was continuously thinking, 'oh no, is it gonna end HERE? Oh, yay, there's more still!' Imagine my disappointment when I finally reached the bottom of the screen. Bah.

Thanks for updating!

[marmaladefever]

As I told someone else, I once sneezed on my hand during square-dancing. It wasn't on purpose or anything, but my partner didn't notice and then got a bit annoyed that I was holding his hand so loosely. lol

Chapter 11 had 500 more words, actually, making this the fourth longest chapter. But who's counting? ;)

[antipasto]

Was your partner hot? LOL, I know, stfu me.

Whaaat? Chapter 11 had 500 more words? Hmm, I guess that I enjoyed this chapter much more than that one then - the phrase "time flies when you're having fun" comes to mind.

[marmaladefever]

Let's see. We were thirteen then, so no idea. But a different square-dancing partner went on to be my boyfriend. :)

Yup, longer. Sorry, too sleepy too formulate a more interesting response.