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Eight and Eighth--Chapter 12

Jun 18, 2008 10:50

Title: Eight and Eighth
Author: Marmalade Fever
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Hermione Granger, and more.
Genres: Romance, Drama, weird combo of in-Hogwarts and post-Hogwarts, and Humor. I can't write a fanfic without humor leaking its way in.
Spoilers: DH (though no epilogue)
Overall Rating: PG-13
Summary: Up from the ashes of seventh year grow the roses ( Read more... )

eight and eighth

Comments 13

tierfal June 19 2008, 19:22:20 UTC

God, I love this story... I love realistic!Draco, and smarmy!Astoria, and just-a-dumb-boy!Ron, and... everything. x) The pace is wonderful in particular -- it just doesn't feel rushed at all, which I think is often a flaw in Dramiones. You're just letting it come together organically, and it's wonderful.

Poor Harry. :'(

marmaladefever June 20 2008, 05:11:59 UTC

I want a really big smily, and :D doesn't quite cover it. Darn.

Poor Ron. So abused. At least I gave him his dream job.

That icon is mesmerizing.

I <3 that you think the pace is organic and that Draco is realistic. ^_^ <--me feeling content

I wish I had more interesting ways to express myself in review replies. I feel boring.

strawberrimelon June 20 2008, 03:42:19 UTC

Thank you doll! I love this story :)
Any teasers for the next chappie?

marmaladefever June 20 2008, 04:58:36 UTC

They may or may not go to class! :O

(I hope it posts. I tried before but it took me to some other page, and now I'm confused.)

strawberrimelon June 20 2008, 05:47:04 UTC

Oooh! Wonderful.

I see a very nice *cough*naughty*cough* chapter idea in my head.
But it's wayyyy too soon for naughty stuff in this story.
Lol! (or is it?) ;D

marmaladefever June 22 2008, 04:33:03 UTC

Um, just to clarify, you do know I don't write smut, right?

strawberrimelon June 22 2008, 04:37:55 UTC

Oh, yes I do. No worries. That was just my imagination having its way...lol! Sorry if that was offensive in any way :)))

strawberrimelon June 22 2008, 04:39:25 UTC

Oh, yes I do. That was just my imagination having its way.
Sorry if it was offensive in any way :))))

marmaladefever June 25 2008, 16:53:29 UTC

Nah, just checking. ;)

antipasto June 22 2008, 07:41:28 UTC

“What?” he asked. “Have you been smoking any of that grass in your name?” he sputtered.

Best line of the chapter!

I actually find it a little hard to grasp the fact that Harry didn't make it in. I'm with Ron - he's Harry-effing-Potter! But no discredit to you, it's your story, and I suppose we need originality than going along with supposed whats its.

So anyway. Now I'm just thinking about the possibilities of how Draco and Hermione are going to get together now! This is my most favourite part of fics (from a reading POV) because nothing else - well, serious enough - is in the way for them, besides their prejudiced beliefs. Leaves more room for possibilities, wouldn't you say? :)

marmaladefever June 24 2008, 20:09:56 UTC

I always like that part of the fic, too. I made my decision about Harry last minute, so I'm still kind of working it out. ;) Glad you liked the smoking line!

antipasto June 25 2008, 05:06:29 UTC

Last minute, eh? Is work treating you that hard?

marmaladefever June 25 2008, 16:51:54 UTC

Well, it was a combo of not-being-sure-what-I-wanted-to-happen, just that I wanted Harry to stay, and I guess work too. I've been working about five days a week, and by the time Sundays and Wednesdays come around, I don't really feel like doing anything.