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Eight and Eighth--Chapter 11

Jun 03, 2008 12:42

Title: Eight and Eighth
Author: Marmalade Fever
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Hermione Granger, and more.
Genres: Romance, Drama, weird combo of in-Hogwarts and post-Hogwarts, and Humor. I can't write a fanfic without humor leaking its way in.
Spoilers: DH (though no epilogue)
Overall Rating: PG-13
Summary: Up from the ashes of seventh year grow the roses ( Read more... )

eight and eighth

Comments 8

sunflowerkudi June 3 2008, 21:18:45 UTC

Im reading and reviewing on fanfic as I type this!

marmaladefever June 4 2008, 16:54:06 UTC

I look forward to weeding my way through my inbox for your review. Oooh!

tierfal June 3 2008, 23:56:44 UTC

Hmm, icon more pertinent than ever...

I think you did a particularly good job here, with the breakup bit -- because you made it make sense. You're not claiming that Ron has been an abusive villain for seven straight years, or that he's got a rock in place of a brain, or any of those things; just that Hermione can't quite love him like that right now. I think you handled it tactfully and quite well.

Though it's still very sad. :'(

Wait, whose side am I on, again? :P

And Astoria for the... well, lose, but she's hilarious. XD Do we get more of her? :D

marmaladefever June 4 2008, 16:53:11 UTC

Very pertinent icon. :)

As I've been reading my other reviews, it sounds like everyone's very happy with the break-up. I'm glad you like the reasoning and the tact behind it. It was kind of a pain to write. lol

I'm sure Astoria will make a reappearance. She's kind of fun to write, like a female Draco.

strawberrimelon June 4 2008, 02:39:00 UTC

AW!
I like this chapter. Looooove the Ron/Hermione tension and the fact that they broke up! YesYesYes!!!
:D

marmaladefever June 4 2008, 16:49:37 UTC

:D Yay!

antipasto June 8 2008, 05:40:34 UTC

I think this is the most progressive chapter by far, but I wouldn't necessarily call it my favourite. I'm glad, however, that you let Ron down easily. Quite happy with that.

Now. Let's hope that Malfoy decides to take advantage of her in her vulnerable state...*sighs* IF ONLY!

But I kind of wish that Draco had gone on a date with Greengrass, just to see that he wouldn't be satisfied at the end of that date and leave him pondering why. Nevertheless, great update!

marmaladefever June 8 2008, 06:01:33 UTC

Aw, progress. It's a good thing. :)

Well, there's plenty of room left in the fic to play around with Astoria. (Plenty of wiggle room, too.) Can't (or at least shouldn't) make any promises, though.

Thanks for reading!