Addendum - Writing
The first of the two chapters I looked at today is confusing. Because I don't remember enough about the book, I can't answer many of the questions that I'm having as a reader. I think there are going to have to be some chapters inserted around it, unless I've made the answers clearer later in the book. There are also some direct contradictions of information in the chapters immediately preceding this one. I wonder if I cleared that up at the end or if that's my job to do now.