What you got under your shirt (A cog in the murder-machine) 1/5

[marlowe78]

Title: What you got under your shirt (A cog in the murder-machine)
Author: marlowe78
Rating: R for later-occurring violence
Characters: Jared, Jensen, OCs
Word count: This part ~1.700, ~21.000 the whole story.

Warnings: Violence in later chapters. Crude language. Mentions of *gosh* heterosexual relationships and underage kissing.

Summary: Highschool-AU

Comments

[nickgregfan]

Sooooo if you have it finished how about once a day updates??? lol

It was great, Make sure you do a big post when its finished so I can read all of it in one go, I HATE WIP's because I either always miss a part, or you get invested and life happens and it doesn't get finished, so I don't read them. I dind't realize this was a WIP (maybe put 1/whatever chapters in it so people know).

Can't wait for it to be done. :)

I ADORE HS au's and this one has great promise, characters are great.

[marlowe78]

I know exactly what you mean, about WIPs. I swear, this is finished, just here and there some touches (like fixing the missing < i > and < / i > in this post, d'ouh!), but it's completely here, on my laptop.

So, you think once-a-day would make you happier? Hmmm. I might just do that ;-)

Thanks for commenting, if you want, I can let you know when I put the last chapter up.

Should be in five days ;-)

*hugs this fic and you*

[soncnica]

I wanna comment, I wanna..

so here goes:

I LOVE THIS STORY!

seriously, YOU need to put this story EVERYWHERE so that people will see the beauty that this story is.. okay, I have the advantage of knowing what will happen and all, but... *hugs this fic*

anywho....

I LOVE THE STYLE this is writen in.. love it, I think that the style is what makes this story so.. amazing... but more on that later on when you post more!!
and and and ... it's ACTUALLY TEENAGER-y! you know what I mean!? 's like... they aren't acting like they're grownups, but you made them SOUND, LOOK like real teens *hugs you*

this is an awesome story, babe! awesome!

okay, I'll comment more for next chapters.. coz... yeah... :))))

whooot!

S.

Re: *hugs this fic and you*

[marlowe78]

D'aww, darling!
Thanks again for going over it and checking for mistakes - you know I love your insights and when you point out what might be misinterpreted.

Also: nifty little icon! S'that a beech, or birch?

Re: *hugs this fic and you*

[soncnica]

it was my pleasure! :)

erm I made the icon, HAVE no clue what that tree is... *shrugs* i just liked the pic! :))

hehe now go write!

[marlowe78]

Whew, I can't tell you how glad I am that I got the teenager-tone right. It's been a while since I was one.

Such a young person reading? I'm glad you like this, even though of course I should warn you about all the nasty language and stuff that might corrupt you *cough*

Thanks for commenting, I'm happy to see you here.