Thursday

Apr 02, 2010 22:55

Title: Thursday
Author:marlowe78
Rating: R? Just bad language.
Characters: Dean, Sam, John
Word count: 8.143

Summary: Written for the following prompt by embroiderama for the hurt/comfort Dean comment fic meme - Wee!Dean thinks he's failed at taking care of Sam, so he runs away from "home".

Spoilers: none
Warnings: Swearing. Tears.

Disclaimer: I sadly do not own ( Read more... )

fic, pre-series, weechesters

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embroiderama April 2 2010, 22:06:14 UTC
Oh, John! Oh, wee boys! This is so painful for all of them, but really wonderful too. Thank you so much for writing it!

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marlowe78 April 2 2010, 22:47:27 UTC
Glad you liked it! It rather ran away from me...

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stjra April 3 2010, 05:37:19 UTC
Awww...Poor wee!Dean.

Poor John. I loved your portrayal of John in this. Very nice. :D

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marlowe78 April 3 2010, 08:56:04 UTC
Thanks, dear! I don't know when my idea of John went kinda mushy, but I never doubted he loves his kids. He is quite character, that one...

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spiceblueeyes April 3 2010, 09:18:17 UTC
Wow, great job. Poor little Dean, alone in the rain in the playground. Tugged my heartstrings.

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marlowe78 April 3 2010, 15:11:51 UTC
Thank you!
It's not that he couldn't survive for a while on his own, he is resourceful enough. But he is still a child - and being alone (to say it in his words) sucks.

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ktrisha April 3 2010, 11:48:10 UTC
Great story. I was hooked from start to finish.

I just want to wrap wee Dean in a blanket and protect him from the world. he needs to be a little kid.

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marlowe78 April 3 2010, 15:13:29 UTC
Thanks for the praise. I couldn't stop writing it, and it got a bit longer than planned.
Poor Dean, it's rather strange that he was such a happy-go-lucky person when we first met him, considering.

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zoemathemata April 3 2010, 12:59:40 UTC
my heart just broke for Dean in this. John too, but mostly Dean!

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marlowe78 April 3 2010, 15:10:11 UTC
I am a very cruel person: that was my intention *wink*
Thanks for your comment!

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