Don't just stand there, say nice things to me

[marlowe78]

All right, folks. This here has been bugging me for a while now and I finally made myself write it. It's kind of a sequel to Making friends with shadows on my wall and it would be better if you read that one first, BUT it can be read as a one-shot, my friend soncnica told me.

Without further ado, I present:

Title: Don't just stand there, say nice things

Comments

[ferrous_wheeler]

That. Was. Brilliant! Hadn't read the prequel (erm, sequel?) so was guessing who the initial character was, and it works perfectly as Kane. Loved this!

[marlowe78]

Hey - thank you so much :) I'm so glad it worked and the guess-work was on purpose. Even if you've read the first story, it's still guessing (or at least it should be)

[fireheart13]

Gritty and visceral and really well done.

[marlowe78]

Thanks! So glad you liked it :-)