The Real LJ Idol * Season 11 * Week 22: Sudden Death Write Off-Open Topic

[marlawentmad]

Fallow

Comments

[alycewilson]

I like the juxtaposition of romance and foreboding, the playfulness of it.

[karmasoup]

Holy cow, the rise of spring has never been so sexy! It never occurred to me that her dance with death - breaking through the rot of his trail, letting fall and winter go - could be so... mischievous. <3
I imagine his dance with summer probably has a completely different feel, but I'm such a lover of autumn, that would be interesting, too.

[rayaso]

I have no idea how you could write such a poem in so little time and under the pressure of a write-off. It was excellent.

[flipflop_diva]

This is lovely - so sweet yet disturbing almost at the same time. I love it!

[encrefloue]

Such nice play on that space between death and rebirth. I really liked the analogy of the nervous system to a system of roots.