UGH THAT LAST LINE. I MUST BE CRAZY NOT TO BE CRYING.slasher48June 16 2011, 09:09:47 UTC
BUT THERE IS SO MUCH TO BE HAPPY ABOUT AT THE SAME TIME. THEIR CONVERSATION AND MARK LAUGHING AT EDUARDO NOT KNOWING HE KNEW AND "YOU SHOULD KISS ME" AND THEY KISS AND MARK GETS UP AND DOESN'T GIVE UP AND IT'S ALL FOR WARDO. ALL BECAUSE THEY'VE GOT TO HAVE THE CHANCE MARK CAN GIVE THEM BY GETTING THROUGH THIS.
OH GOD YOU NEARLY KILLED ME WHEN MARK DIDN'T WANT TO GET UP. I KNEW IT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN AND YOU STILL NEARLY KILLED ME. FEELING SORRY FOR YOURSELF AND NOT WANTING TO PUSH THROUGH THE EXCRUCIATING PAIN SEEMS TO BE A RUNNING THEME IN CANCER PATIENTS AND EVEN MARK IS NOT IMMUNE TO HUMAN WEAKNESS, AS THIS STORY HAS SHOWCASED SO ADEPTLY.
I LOVE THAT THEY ARE TOGETHER AND I HATE THE GOODBYE KISS AND I AM SCARED AS FUCK THAT EDUARDO'S BREAKDOWN IS FORESHADOWING AWFUL THINGS. PLEASE WRITE ME MORE SOON SO THAT I CAN EITHER BAWL FOR GOOD OR SMILE AGAIN! :MUAH: I LOVE YOU FOR EITHER! ♥
I HOPE THE ENDING IS DARN HAPPY BECAUSE OH MY GOD.savetomorrowJune 16 2011, 09:42:41 UTC
Oh my god, why do you do this to me in the morning when I'm already sick and emotional and listening to angsty music. *weeps*
I don't know what to say anymore. This fic just kills me in so many ways. My heart is murdered. I literally had chills when Mark said he wouldn't go back to the hospital. MY GOD DON'T SCARE ME LIKE THAT OH GOD OH GOD.
I will quote things, because it's not like I'll be able to say anything intelligent here anyway.
The way Mark feels…it’s written in ink on the soft skin of his face and in the pale blue-grey of his eyes. In the regret in his words.
Okay, that bit is just so beautiful.I can't even. Yeah. Enough said.
“Of course. Our entire graduating year knew, Wardo. You were always so…touchy. Remember in the dining hall that time, we had to go to a lecture and I didn’t want to go so I figured you’d just go on your own, but instead you stood up and picked me up, right out of my seat, and pushed me out of the room. People used to call me Mrs Saverin after that.”Oh, this reminds me of that amazing Jesse/
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This is so beautiful I don't even have words. ;__; I understand how hard this must be to write, so thank you for going through it, the result is definitely worth is. <3
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Have a safe trip x
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OH GOD YOU NEARLY KILLED ME WHEN MARK DIDN'T WANT TO GET UP. I KNEW IT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN AND YOU STILL NEARLY KILLED ME. FEELING SORRY FOR YOURSELF AND NOT WANTING TO PUSH THROUGH THE EXCRUCIATING PAIN SEEMS TO BE A RUNNING THEME IN CANCER PATIENTS AND EVEN MARK IS NOT IMMUNE TO HUMAN WEAKNESS, AS THIS STORY HAS SHOWCASED SO ADEPTLY.
I LOVE THAT THEY ARE TOGETHER AND I HATE THE GOODBYE KISS AND I AM SCARED AS FUCK THAT EDUARDO'S BREAKDOWN IS FORESHADOWING AWFUL THINGS. PLEASE WRITE ME MORE SOON SO THAT I CAN EITHER BAWL FOR GOOD OR SMILE AGAIN! :MUAH: I LOVE YOU FOR EITHER! ♥
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I don't know what to say anymore. This fic just kills me in so many ways. My heart is murdered. I literally had chills when Mark said he wouldn't go back to the hospital. MY GOD DON'T SCARE ME LIKE THAT OH GOD OH GOD.
I will quote things, because it's not like I'll be able to say anything intelligent here anyway.
The way Mark feels…it’s written in ink on the soft skin of his face and in the pale blue-grey of his eyes. In the regret in his words.
Okay, that bit is just so beautiful.I can't even. Yeah. Enough said.
“Of course. Our entire graduating year knew, Wardo. You were always so…touchy. Remember in the dining hall that time, we had to go to a lecture and I didn’t want to go so I figured you’d just go on your own, but instead you stood up and picked me up, right out of my seat, and pushed me out of the room. People used to call me Mrs Saverin after that.”Oh, this reminds me of that amazing Jesse/ ( ... )
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