QaF RPS: Five 1/8 - September

[marishna]

Title: Five: September
Pairing: Randy/Gale
Rating: PG-13 for this bit, will be NC-17.
Disclaimer: I don't know Randy or Gale. I've never seen filming. Gale's straight, Randy's gay. I'm going to hell. Let's dance!
Summary: "We go back to Toronto in a couple weeks." ... Randy gave a short, nervous chuckle that he knew Gale picked up on. Gale

Comments

[seedyapartment]

Ooh, this hurts. It was beautiful.

"Then by all means, don't let me keep you," Gale drawled on the other end. I think my heart flipped over when I read that, I was so happy.
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"Is that all you miss?" Gale asked. Randy held his breath for a moment before blowing it out.

"Yeah."

Gale nodded. "Alright then."
Ouch, that was so awesome.

I can not wait to see where you go with this. I really like it.

[sian265]

I'm hooked! And a little sad at the tense atmosphere between them, very much looking forward to more of this:)

[lit_writergirl]

Why, why, why is that all he misses? I am completely hooked.

" "I thought you were great up there," Gale whispered in his ear. Randy froze while Gale let him go and continued on to the table."

I loved this line - please continue!

[luceononuro]

OK - I'm hooked - post soon - tapping foot - waiting expectantly...

[msjudi]

Looking forward to the next installment :)