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Story: Not an Art Guy - RenIchi, NC-17 / M (Bleach)

Mar 20, 2010 13:51

Story: Not an Art Guy
Pairing: RenIchi
Words: 2900-ish
Rating: NC-17 / M
Warnings: yaoi, sex scenes...smut smut smut. No real plot to speak of. <3 me anyway ( Read more... )

!explicit, fanfiction, mature, renichi, comfort, renji, waff, fluffy, humor, smut, story, nc-17, ichigo, plot what plot

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marisaserise March 22 2010, 03:30:26 UTC

hey, saving people from wedding stress and angst is how I roll, yo :)

I'm not used to the first person slant at all, as I often dislike stories in it -- I don't really know why that is, considering I generally write stories where the audience can hear both parties thoughts and see both actions and such.

LOL, I was tempted to add some zan-penis funny in thar but you know :)

Hotness is guaranteed XD but the sweetness is hard because I wanted to avoid mushy -- these boys are strong and I wanted the oneshot to reflect that.

I'm still not fully digging the oneshot format -- I'm a multichapper to the max, but with my schedule picking up for the spring run, I just can't start another multichapper without closing out what I have. :)

the idea of a man waiting for his lover naked was just...explosively hot. I saw it while I was at the store and just about melted. Mmm. (I mean, I was pushin' my cart through the store and saw the image and just...melted. zomg yay.

Thanks a bunch for the comment love.

I was going to tell you this, and I forgot -- your last oneshot shows a hell of a lot of confidence. I did catch that and I really, really, really found that hot :) Growth is good :)

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marisaserise March 22 2010, 17:14:59 UTC

Oh yeah, I think confidence is the hottest thing in the writer. Now, I tend to drive past confidence and speed headfirst into 'cocky bitch', but it's warm there and they have free margaritas! and shoes. I'm all in like a poker game!

Yeah -- I mean, sometimes I have a thing for mush...but most of the time...little sweet, little spicy, with the right amount of smut.

there has to be smut. i can't even see myself writing gen...dunno why. maybe one day. :)

I find oneshots challenging because I'm forced to bring the reader to a resolution right then, right there. it's a good lesson.

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