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Story: Not an Art Guy - RenIchi, NC-17 / M (Bleach)

Mar 20, 2010 13:51

Story: Not an Art Guy
Pairing: RenIchi
Words: 2900-ish
Rating: NC-17 / M
Warnings: yaoi, sex scenes...smut smut smut. No real plot to speak of. <3 me anyway ( Read more... )

!explicit, fanfiction, mature, renichi, comfort, renji, waff, fluffy, humor, smut, story, nc-17, ichigo, plot what plot

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zealot1138 March 21 2010, 03:58:31 UTC

This was so sweet without being sappy - THAT is not an easy thing to express so fantastic job, woman!
And every time you write RenIchi, I think your style for them gets better and better where you shouldn't ever question that they aren't "your thing," you know what I mean? You write them brilliantly.
It felt great just reading something that was bright and light and sexy and lovely. I'm still feeling torn up about RenIchi, but this definitely helped mend the wounds.
I'm always so thrilled you find inspiration for them even during your busiest times.

marisaserise March 21 2010, 04:35:17 UTC

thank you :)

I think I've finally hit a point where I feel like I'm in their world -- there's a few challenges and snags still (I wouldn't write a chessboard story for these two, for example -- unless I could count on the resolution to be strong for them, and you know how much I love the chessboard)

...but I like it. It's a fun challenge. I was on the bus and this popped into my head and I knew it needed to be fleshed out.

I do wish I had more time -- but right now, I know it would be bad to put in the time needed to update all of my fics. I have to be selfish in order to take care of what's important to me. But here and there, I'll still try to publish something.

zealot1138 March 21 2010, 04:44:43 UTC

I think RenIchi should feel so lucky that your inspirations to write a random one shot is about them. =D

marisaserise March 21 2010, 04:47:47 UTC

I know! I needed a smut fix... and I started writing the RenIchi before I started my AiGin one-shot -- and I looked at the two drafts today and was like 'oh boy, look which one I'm going to pick!'

I also notice the RenIchi stores on ffnet update fast and furiously, and I like seeing my name in the mix like YEAH BITCHES I'SE STILL HYAH YO!

lol @ your icon -- Ichigo is lookin' like he's about to cut somebody. i cut u, i cut uuuuu hahaha.

sorry. a little high on multiple cups of tea, apparently.

zealot1138 March 21 2010, 04:55:17 UTC

BTW, have you x-posted your RenIchi fics to the ren_x_ichi comm?

marisaserise March 21 2010, 04:56:59 UTC

not yet. one, I need to give them another look over and make sure that I nipped all the errors -- and as far as 'Not an Art Guy' goes, I'm a touch nervous to actually post it for some reason. It's not my normal writing style so ...I don't know. It's midnight and I'm not-quite-here re:fandom so my reactions may be cracky-whacky.

zealot1138 March 21 2010, 04:59:20 UTC

I can appreciate your wanting to review for necessary edits, but no worries on your style. I think you should do it (when you're feeling ready, of course).

marisaserise March 21 2010, 05:02:18 UTC

K :) I've spent way too much time in fanfic_rants I think -- I just like to go back and make sure that my tenses aren't completely off (my English teacher used to tease me by saying my tenses like to blend into each other and wander for miles), and that I've got a decent flow. I'm a former spelling bee champ so I have a tendency to be a bit... wordalicious about spelling errors in my fics. JT is my characterization guy more than anything -- I have better spelling/grammar than he does lol... I proof a lot more than he does, so it gets me faster.

mm, OT as hell but... I'm going to make homemade tortellini next week. I thought about you :)

zealot1138 March 21 2010, 05:06:54 UTC

Ha. Funny you bring this up.
I've been re-reading BR and I'm horrified by so many errors I have let through. I mean, I know I wrote a lot of them at like 2am and stuff, but I have tried to re-read them and fix them, especially after posting to LJ but I have STILL found so many errors.
I feel like total FAIL about it, but part of me is sick of reading my writing, the thought of going through it AGAIN is just - GAH. Oh well. I used to care about wanting my fanfic to be perfect, but lately? I guess I feel like I've accomplished something just by posting. (And yeah, deep down, I feel lame for having let my quality control slip.) I have become that which I used to despise. >_<

marisaserise March 21 2010, 05:09:45 UTC

oh my, haven't seen that icon in a while :)

it's okay, though... nobody's expecting anything from you except for you to hit the post button. that's what matters. and for the record, I STILL re-read BR ... like holy shit, that morning blowjob? and that really hot non-con AiRenji still takes my breath away....

Renji in the maid outfit with that tight ass out... the leather fashion show...

him debating on using the EVOO on poor Ichigo...

oh, and my favorite nonR/I moment has to be the business meeting blowjob RenBya...ffffffuuuuuuu. I didn't know you had it in you to write Byakuya like THAT.

zealot1138 March 21 2010, 05:14:15 UTC

Aww, the BR recap you just gave me made me smile a LOT. The fact you can recall all those moments like that (heart beats faster).
In terms of forgiving my sloppy writing, I thank you. I'd never let that slide in RL, btw. But, yeah, I have gotten sloppier around here. Even my basic typing has gotten worse.
But, even in all your hectic life, thanks for always trying to cheer me up.
Sorry I suck at reciprocating most times.

marisaserise March 21 2010, 05:20:19 UTC

your presence here is enough. it's a sign you haven't forgotten about me. I've had the same hectic life for... a good 13 years now. so I don't really notice my life the way others do, I guess.

you don't suck at reciprocatin' -- I wouldn't know what to do with the sentiment anydamnway, lol. I'm convinced that the world cannot help but the bend to the will of a person with limitless vision, and I will not let go of what I know belongs to me.

I even remember Kenpachi -- you made me melt over KEN FUCKING PACHI .... that's masterful, pulling someone into a character they normally ignore. you're a lot better writer than you give yourself credit for. I edit a lot of people and I read a lot of stuff too, y'know :) my pro writer cred ain't worth shit in fanficland, but if I can use it to convince you that you rock the house, I will :P

zealot1138 March 21 2010, 05:28:18 UTC

"I even remember Kenpachi -- you made me melt over KEN FUCKING PACHI .... that's masterful, pulling someone into a character they normally ignore. you're a lot better writer than you give yourself credit for"

Are you trying to get me all weepy??? XD

thank, my dear. you are amazing in so many aspects. xoxo - your CFO (still for today)

zealot1138 March 21 2010, 05:07:31 UTC

as for the tortellini - I wants!

marisaserise March 21 2010, 05:16:56 UTC

d'aww, little Shinji - haven't seen him in a while ( ... )

zealot1138 March 21 2010, 05:24:07 UTC

you're making me hungry!
and no feeling down about the past - think of it as it giving you this opp to get all the good stuff now without having to unload anything later (lame words, i know)
and i like my tortellini with a simple filling so I'm not one for meat inside it. XD

ok, i'm off the laptop for now. xoxo

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