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[Story] The Everything Dance - RenIchi (OneShot)

Feb 20, 2010 15:22

Title: The Everything Dance

Rating: NC-17

Pairing: Renji/Ichigo

Warnings: Yaoi, lemons, voyeurism

Words: 2744

Summary: Renji shows off a few skills that have nothing to do with the battlefield. Thankfully, Ichigo approves, and shows off a few skills of his own. Oneshot.

Notes: Just a quick oneshot - I had toyed with the idea of a sexy dance ( Read more... )

!explicit, adult, fanfiction, renichi, renji, yaoi, smut, story, erotica, oneshots, ichigo

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zealot1138 February 20 2010, 22:53:12 UTC

So... is getting bashed over the head with the constant RenIchi sinking in? I mean, you write THIS - THIS from you who says RenIchi isn't your "thing"... I AM McLOVIN' THIS SO MUCH!
Oh, let me count the ways...

"Because...all I can tell you...regardless...of what you think...I'm thinking...the two locations are connected. The first one doesn't even begin to react without the second. Without my heart...excitement is just...excitement. There's no joy in it. Does that get through to you well enough?"
I LOVE how you wrote that to express that sex without the LURVE just don't cut it the same way. >_<

"Demanding."
"Requesting."
"Sounds like a demand to me."
Simple - direct - hilarious - THEM. XD

This was far more intense, far more real to him - even without the actual body to go with it. This was soul against soul, need against need, fulfillment and desire trapping them both until they came to the proper resolution.
More real, the soul-to-soul... GAH! I am so happy... >_< !!!!!

As a RenIchi girl, gawd, THANK YOU. 8D
xoxo <33333333

marisaserise February 20 2010, 23:37:32 UTC

Yep. :) I think my writing has transformed beyond "zomg OTP / not my OTP" - I think every pairing deserves the same level of care and expression - so even though I'm not as much of a fangirl for these two are you are (AiGin just -has- me - I don't even...) I still try to write to bring out the best in them, you know?

well, I liked the idea of some down and dirty sex but I didn't want to go without some indication that this was simply the addition of yumminess, not just a one-night stand-ish thing. I don't see Ichigo really being comfortable with that.

*squeaks* I was worried about having Ichigo come off as too weak, even though I love having him play the student to Renji's patient teacher... mmm..

Aww, I heart you bunches. You know how hard it is for me to write these two. :) <333333

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