Sam fic: "Bad Step" Part 4, rated PG

May 28, 2006 13:24

Okay, who wants their heart broken some more? Sam H/C, coming up!

Bad Step, Part 4 )

sam fic, lotr fic - gen

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mariole May 28 2006, 21:29:43 UTC
Oh, no kidding! Bring on the Old Winyards! Or at least a hearty ale. Poor Sambie, he's in quite a fix. Almost as bad as Mordor. *sniffles*

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anonymous May 28 2006, 19:54:35 UTC
Oh, wow... That's so very much like Sam, to try to get himself out and do all those things... and then to fall again! And now the Gaffer has missed the only clue!

I'm not going to have any fingernails left, but I'll be happy!

*waits for more*

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rabidsamfan May 28 2006, 20:37:48 UTC
That was me.

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mariole May 28 2006, 21:28:36 UTC
I'm very sorry about your fingernails, but I'm so glad you're enjoying the adventure. Poor Sam; I'm so mean to him!

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anonymous May 28 2006, 20:18:11 UTC
I'm completely hooked. It's fascinating to follow Sam's train of thought. And very canon, too!

This adventure is also quite original: most of the time, Sam's hurt consists of being sick and worry for Mister Frodo. We rarely get to see him in a fix like that, as the hero of a misadventure.

Yes, poor Sam, but at the same time he is not totally helpless. We get to see a resourseful gardener. I enjoy witnessing this (not very often shown in fics)aspect of him.

Still, I can't wait for him to be out of the hole, taken care of, healed, and (later) hiking with his Frodo!

Mariole, tell me you won't leave him there for weeks!

Nimue

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mariole May 28 2006, 21:32:06 UTC
Well, not weeks, but I do have a bit more planned. I'm really glad you're enjoying this aspect of Sam. I've always viewed him as immensely competent on his own ground. True, through various bad chances he took a bad step, but he's got a plan and is acting on it.

I can't believe Sam doesn't get beaten up more! Well, after this bludgeoning, he'll be begging for a head cold. Thanks for reading, Nimue!

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anonymous May 28 2006, 21:38:44 UTC
By "weeks", I meant for the update, which would be the same as having Sam suspended in time, in that hole.
So for the story, it's going to be the whole three days then. Well, I feel for Sam, but it is not as painful to read as I feared, since he has the power to do something about it.

Nimue

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mariole May 29 2006, 03:29:22 UTC
Yay!

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elenya54 May 28 2006, 20:55:08 UTC
I knew there'd be trouble for Sam at the end of part 2, when I realised how his waving goodbye would be interpreted. :( I hope you aren't going to keep him down there until Frodo comes back (how long was it? 3 or 4 days, or longer? Didn't Frodo say something about seeing what he felt like doing and who he felt like visiting? :sends vibes to Frodo to tell him that what he *really* wants to do is turn back early:

As he raked and smoothed the soil among the lettuces, he glanced at the sky. No sign of rain.

:eek: :eek: :eek: How's Sam going to survive without rain? :eek:

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mariole May 28 2006, 21:34:38 UTC
(((Elenya))) It's so great to see you here.

Yes, Frodo planned to be gone three days. Three. This could get bad. I'm sorry, but I'm just reporting what happened. I couldn't possibly be cruel enough to architect these problems, could I?

Thanks for reading.

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belleferret May 28 2006, 21:43:21 UTC
Oh but you're a cruel woman Mariole, a hard cruel woman!!

*frets for poor Sam*

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mariole May 29 2006, 03:29:55 UTC
I am. Extremely cruel. *holds out wrists for handcuffs*

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belleferret May 29 2006, 11:21:59 UTC
Ooh and kinky too!

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mariole May 29 2006, 14:32:55 UTC
Admit it: you love it!

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