Why Life's a Joke 2/2 [Fanfiction]

Mar 04, 2014 17:32


Title: Why Life's a JokeAuthor: marinoa
Rating: T
Characters / Pairing: England, France, FrUK
Sumary: Arthur Kirkland and Francis Bonnefoy are simply trying to live their respective lives, but apparently someone up there has decided not to make it easy for them. FrUK, oneshot, AU.

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m_welshpot March 21 2014, 18:58:38 UTC
'tis brilliant! I absolutely love how you've taken the idea and carried it out till the very end so steadily, and so smoothly! And the greatest thing is that while, on the one hand, there is nothing redundant about the plot (like dialogues or feelings or characters that just could/should not be), on the other hand, there are small and very appealing details (like Arthur's remark about the strikes) here and there. How do you manage to produce such high quality work?..
Thank you very much for this! :D

(Muuten, ei se kyllä haittaa, but there's probably no need to capitalize 'suistua' in the paragraph starting with "That, however, proved..." ;)

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marinoa March 22 2014, 12:06:03 UTC
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dammit, this is so embarrassing! xD I typed that word with capital letters to notice it later, because I wanted to check the word before typing it down in English... and forgot. Damn. Thanks for pointing it out! :'D

And hey, thanks so much for the rest of the comment as well! I'm so excited to hear that you like this little story, especially since it's the first proper thing I've written in a long while. :)

And what, you are Finnish? Seems so rare to find fellow Finns in fan fction world. Or wait, your location seems to be Russia (not that I stalked your profile)..? Oh, whatever, thanks again for commenting! xD

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m_welshpot March 22 2014, 18:10:52 UTC
I don't know what you mean by 'the first proper thing in a long while', because everything you write seems pretty proper to me :) Seriously, you are one of the very few authors (and I (unfortunately) read tons of ff) whose stories are never dull. I wish I could somehow convey just how much I mean by that!..

Olen venäläinen, mutta opiskelen suomea - ja opiskelu etenee sietämättömän (!!!) hitaasti, koska netistä ei löyty mitään mielenkiintoista (tai jotain, missä kukaan ei kuole) luettavaksi (kirjojen tilaaminen Suomesta on valitettavasti liian kallista). I was mad with joy when I found "Taas niitä päiviä", but you can only re-read something so many times! And you can take it as a hint, but you don't have to take it as a hint, 'cause I know how weird it feels writing fanfiction in your own language.

I wish I could write more sensible comments!.. :C In any case, thank you again! C:

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marinoa March 31 2014, 18:55:39 UTC
О, интересно! Вы россиянка, которая изучает финский, а я - финнка, которая изучает русский! I find this rather funny. :D And to think that you study Finnish, of all languages! Ha ha, perhaps I might write a small story in Finnish, just for you. ;) Or at least I could try, I seem to have very little time for writing at the moment. Or then I'm just looking for excuses...

Wow. xD I feel the need to thank you again - kiitos!

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ext_2751226 October 25 2014, 04:58:10 UTC
Wonderful story!

Thank you for your writing.

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marinoa February 20 2015, 15:45:08 UTC
Thanks for commenting this too! :)

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