Prince's Hand and Half of the Kingdom (12/12) [fanfiction]

Dec 09, 2012 12:28

Title: Prince's Hand And Half of the Kingdom
Author: marinoa
Characters/Pairings: England, France, Spain, Prussia, Romano. FrUK, some Prumano.
Rating: T
Summary: Having once refused to obey a frog, Prince Arthur is now forced to marry one. Both parties are unwilling, but even with the help of their friends, can they win against spells... and time? FrUK ( Read more... )

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crashedtime August 28 2013, 23:39:27 UTC
Oh.......oh no........it's over!! /flails

I wasn't ready!!!! XD

Seriously, though, thank you for writing this lovely epic tale. I have enjoyed every chapter, every moment, and smiled so many times throughout that my cheeks are a little sore. It wasn't sappy, but very true to all of the characters involved. Arthur's final realization and everything leading up to it was perfect. Francis returning to hear it straight from Arthur, in a fit of lover's rage was exquisite. My heart was actually racing for Arthur when he finally realized he had nothing to lose by confessing and being honest. Oh, and the first time, when Francis leaned down from his horse and kissed him, looking all beautiful and noble and vibrant...my heart broke for Arthur...for them both...and I had to admire Arthur's determination to let Francis go no matter what, even at the expense of his own heart.

Most of all, I was so thrilled that they seemed so very happy at the wedding ball, teasing, lighthearted, as if finally able to be themselves for the first time, no real defenses up around one another and at ease.

It was beautiful. T.T Thank you so much for writing it!! I'll definitely continue going through the rest of your writing.

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marinoa March 22 2014, 12:15:50 UTC
Whoa. A comment I never replied! I'm.... I'M SO SORRY. But after half a year I'm finally here to reply. =_=

So, err, thank you very much! I'm always excited and honored to hear that someone liked my story. That's what keeps me writing. :) Thank you for reading and bothering to leave a comment as well, and sorry again that I suck at replying. OTL

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