[Mistletoe Kisses] A Well Devised Plan

Jan 18, 2008 18:58

[Characters]: Abarai Renji and Kuchiki Byakuya.
[Summary]: Byakuya finally sets in motion his plan to get Renji under Mistletoe. But was it really his plan?
[Word Count]: 836
[Finished]: 11.January.2008
[Beta]: by the very talented and insightful
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[mistletoe kisses], p:byakuya/renji, !bleach, #fanfiction

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madrona_8 January 18 2008, 19:39:11 UTC
Yay! the plan worked! That's a beautiful image of Senbonzakura turning into mistletoe. Almost a dance of apologies...and then the definite jealously of Renji kissing Ichigo at the end. Who knew Byakuya was so passionate?

hmm, did you want this under a cut?

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marinliliz January 18 2008, 19:49:18 UTC
I would be very mean if I didn't get them to kiss under the mistletoe, wouldn't I? What a beautiful expression: 'dance of apologies' it really fits. And I have in my mind that Byakuya is a very passionate man, he only doesn't shows it to everyone. Or at least, that's my excuse for writing him so out of character.

I think I fixed the cut thingy, but thanks for letting me know.

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madrona_8 January 18 2008, 19:52:00 UTC
Oh I totally agree. He's very passionate, just like you said, he's not very expressive in public. It's always the quiet ones........

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marinliliz January 18 2008, 20:01:52 UTC
Hehehe, completely right>.<

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morgothine January 18 2008, 19:55:26 UTC
It can't be the end !!! T_T
Well, at least, Renji finally got to kiss his beloved Taichou ^^
Thank you for sharing :D

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marinliliz January 18 2008, 20:05:57 UTC
Thank you for reading and all your sweet comments.*hugs*

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nnoi January 18 2008, 20:29:11 UTC
YAY!!!!!!!!! I love it I am kinda sad they are over but I loved each and every one of them this one was great! thanks for sharing!!!!!!

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marinliliz January 18 2008, 21:10:45 UTC
Thank you for reading.

Don't be sad, I'll go on writing ByaRen and other Bleach pairings.

And OMG!!!! Your icon XD, I'm trying to picture Byakuya saying that>.<

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nnoi January 18 2008, 21:39:28 UTC
LOL screw Bya I am saying it LOL I love renji!!!!

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marinliliz January 18 2008, 21:59:40 UTC
ROTFLMAO Hold it tiger!

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sommar January 18 2008, 23:26:28 UTC
awww... I'm so loving Byakuya right now XD
and kinda jealous, I wanna have Renji under all those mistletoes branches tooo :D

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marinliliz January 18 2008, 23:58:45 UTC
What's with this girls (I'm assuming you're a girl) today, they all wanna jump Renji? >.< Well he's not mine to keep *sighs sadly* so be my guest and whisk him away under a mistletoe.

Thanks for reading and your comment^___~

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sommar January 19 2008, 00:12:12 UTC
how could you NOT wanna jump Renji?!?!
*mind drifts off to that long red hair, musceled -but slender- body, those tattoos, his smirk, those intense eyes that makes your... gahhhh!!! now I need a cold shower *LOLOLOLOL*

sorry bout this rant XD XD XD XD

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marinliliz January 19 2008, 00:27:34 UTC
Who said I didn't wanna jump Renji?XD *lures Renji, away from you girls, with a mistletoe*>.<

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vampyreranger January 19 2008, 03:52:32 UTC
Aw, this was quite sweet! I like the idea of Byakuya and senbonsakura working together.

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marinliliz January 19 2008, 05:26:32 UTC
I must say I was kinda inspired by a ByaRen fic, where Senbonzakura takes the form of a beautiful man and sometimes helps Byakuya deal with stress, if you know what I mean.XD Smexiness apart, they have a great interaction and Byakuya relies on his zanpakutou more than anyone else.

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vampyreranger January 19 2008, 05:42:47 UTC
Oh, could you link me to that fic? *puppy eyes* And he really does really more on his sword than anyone else. They all use hand to hand or kido to supplement.

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marinliliz January 19 2008, 06:19:40 UTC
Now that you mention it he does, only, seem to use his sword.

Here's the link: http://dead.byaren.org/fic.php
it's gigantic and seems to be taking forever to edit, the authors started RP-ing and then converted it into a fic, or are converting it.

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