Pregnant Belly [Sandbox Society]

[marinliliz]

[Characters]: Abarai Renji and Kuchiki Byakuya.
[Pairing]: ByaRen
[Summary]: What is it with people and touching a pregnant belly?
[Word Count]: 588
[Finished]: 29.October.2009
[Beta]: not beta-read
[Warnings]: AU | Mpreg
[Rating]: PG-13
[Author's Notes]: Found this in my notebook yesterday while looking for space to write something elseXD, it was in

Comments

[gokuma]

"Even Zaraki has tried it. ZARAKI!!!" *wolf howling with laughter* XDDDD

[marinliliz]

It's still too soon for any KenHana but maybe he had it all planned from the time he noticed Shinigami men could have children.;P

[gokuma]

*imagines Byakuya's icy "youaresooooonotdoingit" glare* XD

[marinliliz]

Like Zaraki's going to be stopped by that.

[shynishyshallow]

How. Utterly. Cute. And warm. Very warm and very loving and very caring. I am melting.

It's so rare to find good m-preg fics. (Not that I've ever looking - those I read were all just... disgusting. Badly written.) I've never really like it either, but there's just something about your series that makes me all fuzzy inside. I'm just that much of a sucker for fluff, yeah.

Anyway, just wanted you to know I'm smiling now because of the fic and must go re-read it~

[marinliliz]

*getting you a pretty beach bucket so you can melt all comfortably* Thank you for your lovely words.♥

I don't know much about mpreg fics in Bleach aside from my work but I've found really good one in other fandoms. I think the trick is or you take it all very seriously and as something that is completely normal and happens everyday, or you crack it all up. Anything in between turns out just plain weird.XD

I hope I've converted you to our Sandbox babies, if it's fluff you're a sucker for I've got you for life.

[vampyreranger]

This is awesome! I'm so sorry I haven't commented in a while. I adore Zaraki trying to touch teh belly.

[marinliliz]

Thanks. No worries, if you comment from time to time, I'm happy. And Zaraki is Zaraki!;P

[gokuma]

And teh belly is TEH BELLY :D Don't mess with mumdads, it can be very dangerous :D

[marinliliz]

Beware of the MumDads! ->sounds like a Halloween flickXDDDDDDD

[marinliliz]

Yay!!!

Yes, I'm evil like thatXD

I can't wait to see it.

[marianek]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWW <3 I can't find the right words to express, how much I love it :) The idea of Byaku, talking to the baby, the description of what he feels to Renji, the overwhelming feeling of trust...it's a masterpiece <3 It's a shame you write so rarely, but when you actually write, it's REALLY something :) *nuzzles talented wolf*

[marinliliz]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWW Thank you♥♥♥ *swishes tails happily*

Yeah I'm a bit inconstant when writing but I have the feeling if I wrote more often it would work out things quite as good as this. If I force things they don't come out as nice.