[Bleach] - A Roll in the Hay

[marinliliz]

[Characters]: Hisagi Shuuhei and Kira Izuru
[Summary]: On a golden hayfield, two shinigami fukutaichou enjoy a sweet roll in the hay.
[Word Count]: 355
[Finished]: 11.October.2008
[Warnings]: PWP, Oral sex, Hand Job,
[Beta]: not beta-read
[Rating]: NC-17
[Notes]: Again for Bleach yaoi contest. My first attempt at Shuuhei/Kira.

Comments

[sommar]

oh my... I drooled *blushes*
^o^

[marinliliz]

Good, I like to get those kinds of reactions from readers. Glad you enjoyed.;]

[ceestar]

Ahh so nice~
You used such an elegant choice of words to describe the scene, this was absolutely beautiful~

[marinliliz]

Thank you.

[beautifvl_flaw]

You wrote a beautiful (and very sexy) scene here, and your writing is so elegant!

[marinliliz]

Elegant seems to be the word for this fic.>.< Thank you for reading.

[silverharmony]

Very beautifully written. Thank you for sharing this.

[marinliliz]

Thank you for reading.

[annieroo2]

This was as adorable as it was erotic. It was like peeking in through the barn window watching two horny teenagers during a tryst.

It was a lot of fun. :D

[marinliliz]

Thank you.♥♥♥ That's an amazing comment, kinda the angle I was aiming for;]