FFXII Fic: Love Letter (Larsa X Penelo)

[mariagoner]

This serves a companion piece of two earlier Larsa X Penelo stories ( A Sort of Fairy Tale and Songs in the Key of Strange Minor), though it's not necessary to read those earlier fics in order to understand this one. It was written for the radiant arcane_phoenix, who likes to upload huge lists of songs for me. Aural accompaniment to the writing process always

Comments

[mithrigil]

I have one eensy weensy little gripe.

An Emperor is "His (Imperial) Majesty", not "His Highness".

Other than that:

SUCH RIDICULOUS AMOUNTS OF LOVE. This was heartfelt and sweet and just jarring enough and the little devices never got old.

[mariagoner]

GASP! You dare contradict the noble author in her very own domain? Dost thou not know the noble ways of the fan-brat in her natural habitat?! Be thou cast off, now and 4eva!!!1!!

In other words, thanks for the correction. XD I was struggling about the correct way Larsa was supposed to finish his letter, though it was very clear how he wanted to end it. &hearts And I'm glad it worked for you! Strike-outs are pretty sexy when they're deployed right...

[mithrigil]

Agreed on the sexiness. (You also have to change it at the top!)

[mariagoner]

I suuuuuuuuuuuuck. ;_; Am doing so now! Much love for the help once more. ;)

[mithrigil]

Hey, much love for the FIC.

[mariagoner]

If my head now inflates to the extent that I cannot transverse through normal size doors anymore, I shall blame you as the culprit to all my docotrs! ;)

[mariagoner]

Or doctors, even. Clearly I am so struck my your presence that normal spelling loses all it's charms for me!

(Third time in a row, MY GOD...)