Naruto Fic: Lords and Ladies, Chapter 4 (Itachi/Hinata, Sasuke/Hinata, Cast)

[mariagoner]

I'm putting this chapter up a little sooner than expected but I've got something to celebrate. Thanks to the magic of Jewish holidays, I've got two whole weeks of school off, which makes me incandescently giddy with glee. Life is good and gave me just enough time and inspiration to finish this chapter early

Comments

[mariagoner]

Ohohoho... believe me, you shouldn't worry about taking a while to review this story... seeing as how I've now take four months to update it. ::sweat-drop:: Somehow, taking a vacation from writing to go on my honey-moon spiraled off into a non-fandom torpor that saw me being disconnected from LJ for weeks on end...

But finally, after furiously peddling away from writing inertia, I actually managed to update Lords and Ladies! And if you're still interested in reading, I'd love to get your opinion on Chapter 5. I tried to flesh out Itachi and his affair with Hinata-- and Itachi being the Magnificent Bastard he is, he was very close to stealing off the entire series. But thankfully, I think I've tamed him for now so I can focus on Hinata's attempting not to die as Gaara clambers into her life and Sasuke starts getting territorial.

After all, what's the use of setting off to write a fun soap opera if you can't set off love triangles hither-thither and see what ridiculous outcomes come from them? ;)

And if you're interested, a link to chapter 5 of the story:

'And here I thought you were more attracted towards blonds,' Itachi responded dryly, sending another rush of blood circulating to the tops of her cheeks. 'Or have your romantic peccadilloes changed so quickly? If you keep changing your mind from one man to the next, you might be accused of faithlessness quite easily.'