FFXII Fic: The Teeth of Serpents (Vayne, Gabranth, Larsa)

[mariagoner]

My first fanfic for the new year and as a new bride and of course it turns out to be hilariously morbid. ;) But in any case, this is for the exquisite and forever supportive lady_venn(I shall contrive a way to hear your voice yet!) and inspired by the wonderfully black-hearted-when-she-needs-to-be lindensphinx.This Vayne seems like the kind of creature she’d dream up

Comments

[lady_venn]

Excellent job on the first person POV, dear; it's a bitch. ^^

Also, well done on getting into Vayne's head, in a sense (o.O;;;). The language in here just reeks of him, as does the slightly twisted and DARK logic (especially how he is so quick to dispose of the girl in his head, once she's served his purpose).

Now, go write some fluff (or cuddle with your hubby, whichever works :P) and get this out of your system.

Oh, and wish me luck -- I've got a job interview on Thursday, so I might actually have moneys soon!

[mariagoner]

Hee, thank you so much! And I'm glad you though I was able to get into Vayne's head during this fic-- though truth be told, it wasn't as hard as it could have been, considering Vayne's gift for gab. ;) Trying to do this with a quieter character like Basch, however-- now that would have been a challenge! XD

And Vayne? So would not have any sympathy for any daughter of his. She's a female, after all. How in the world could she be properly ruthless as a Solidor, then?

And I wish you much, much, much, much luck! How was your job interview? Did you get a good vibe off of it? ;)

[lady_venn]

And now an AU needs to be written where he has a daughter and she out ruthless/cunnings him. xD

Well, he offered me a job then and there, so I'd say it went pretty damn well. ^^ I'll be starting next month, when the place opens up. :P

[mariagoner]

Yay! Congratulations to you! It's always nice to have moneys at hand. XD

Where will you be working as, btw? And as what?

And I could never write that AU-- it'd be all too easy to make Vayne's "daughter" a Mary Sue. All I'd need to do to complete the picture would be to give her color-changing eyes and have her hook up with Balthier later, hmm? ;)

[lady_venn]

It's a pizza chain that's called Toppers; I highly doubt you've heard of it.

Well, if worst came to worst, you could write it as parody fic. :P But I think it would be quite easy to avoid making her a Sue.