Then he stretches his arm, points his fingers at Kevin as if they were a gun... “I could never do that.” This.... I guess he had to do this to really feel what Bob and Derek went through.?. It's a strong scene...
Glad you liked it. It took me a while to get it right. First it was all too abrupt and it made no sense. Then the talking was too long and too boring. Took quite some editing, but it was worth it.. :D
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This.... I guess he had to do this to really feel what Bob and Derek went through.?. It's a strong scene...
An emotional chapter, very well written.
Thank you!
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