Fanfic: Best laid plans... 8/?

Mar 05, 2014 11:43

Best laid plans 8/..

By Marea67
About: Kevin, Scotty, with some McCallisters and Walkers running around as well.
Rate: This chapter: G
Disclaimer: Not mine. Written with love, not for money.
Summary: That the trouble with good plans... they can go wrong...

AU!!!!!!!!! THIS IS AN AU(=Alternate universe) so things will be most likely different from ( Read more... )

series - best laid plans..., fanfic - au (alternative universe), 2014

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marea67 March 5 2014, 13:10:53 UTC
I feels a bit rushed, but I know, that you know what you are doing :)

To me too, that is why I didn't want to post it last night, but, you know how it works, the story goes as it has to go. :)

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marea67 March 5 2014, 19:13:00 UTC
Thank you, glad you like it. :)

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lilypoppy March 5 2014, 16:36:29 UTC
His breathing quickens and his lips part....
And you stop there, just like that! We need more! ;)
Lovely scene ♥♥

“Man, if you don’t ask him to be your boyfriend, I will ask him to be mine.”
Hilarious! Justin is too funny! :)

Unaware that, in a bar not far away, a high-five is passed between Tommy and Justin
Well played guys!!

Very nice chapter!
Thanks!

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marea67 March 5 2014, 19:12:37 UTC
The 'more' has just been posted. I think that sometimes Scotty and Kevin need the extra push from Justin and Tommy or they don't get anywhere. :)

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laira26 March 5 2014, 19:33:04 UTC
Awwww! I love how sweet and loving is Kevin with Scotty.

Justin and Tommy are great. They remind me when Tommy said that Scotty was hot and Justin told Kevin to say Scotty that he loves him too. lol! I love the Walkers. They were the best.

You left us in the best moment. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

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marea67 March 5 2014, 19:45:56 UTC
Chapter 9 is already up too! Gotta love those Walkers. I think that, for once, I've even managed to make Tommy look good. Transferred all Tommy-hate to Jason, I think. :)

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tiffanie39 March 6 2014, 22:23:27 UTC
I wish I had a Justin Walker.

I was totally torn on how I wanted Kevin to react. On one hand I would have liked him to tell Scotty how horrible of a person Jason was. And on the other I wanted him to be level headed and not push Scotty to feel one thing or another. You definitely did that and more. Very well I might add.

As for the ending of this chapter: they say everything happens for a reason. Looking forward to reading more.

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marea67 March 7 2014, 18:49:04 UTC
It IS difficult to make Kevin supportive of Scotty, wihout him putting Jason down. Glad you liked the way that I did it. ;)

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