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Fanfic: B&S episode 711: part 2/4

Apr 07, 2013 23:10

Season 7 - Episode 711 - Surfer's dream

By Marea67
About: Brothers & Sisters general
Rate: Can’t go higher than PG-13 as this American Television.
Disclaimer: Just escaping from reality here, not created for financial gain.
Summary: It’s my own season 7. Go with it! If you believe you can do better, write it yourself! I dare you!

( Episode 711 - part 2/4 )

series - season 7

Comments 5

lilypoppy April 7 2013, 21:32:37 UTC

“And still I want Tommy dead. DEAD!!!!”
Oh Oh, that sounds bad......

Love Kevin/Tommy conversation about William and Tommy's own feelings for Kevin.

marea67 April 7 2013, 22:19:08 UTC

Yes, it was about time Tommy 'came out' about his feelings. :)

scout_harper April 13 2013, 18:10:56 UTC

Good to see Kitty onto road to recovery.So everybody was roped in...lol....how many are there?The family has grown...
loved Kevin -Tommy talk.

marea67 April 13 2013, 19:04:53 UTC

I think there were about 21-23 of them... :) The logistics of it all! I had, at first, not planned to take Jason/Chad along with me, until I was rearranging the cars (because Justin/Kevin take Justin's car to drive to the station) and I suddenly realized that I was a car short to get everybody back home safely. :D

scout_harper April 13 2013, 19:49:06 UTC

Ha ha ha...the things a writer have to keep track of.I never thought of the cars.We readers have the easy job,huh?We only have to make time to comment and sometimes RL won't even allow you to do that.HOW do you manage to write a full episode every week?You must be very organized person.Kudos!

Actually I have this heavy feeling in my heart.I think for the actual B$S series I won't have felt this much.Tommy wasn't there in the last season.You redeemed him and then killed him off.You cruel lady you...lol....I agree your way gave Tommy's death much more impact.I should go watch 'glass houses' ....to see him hurt Kevin will make me hate him again..
You know all other scenes too came across so well. Glimpses of each family at the beach,Nora watching,the packing up and going home with kids tired and falling asleep,the slow build up of dread till Tommy's body is revealed...loved them all.
Truly a strong,well written episode.
Thanks for writing