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marea67

drabble: no more

Nov 08, 2009 01:58

No more.

By Marea67
About: Kevin, Tommy
Rate: G.
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: 100 words: Kevin hurts Tommy back. Should be read as sequel to Stupid, stupid, stupid!

*****

His phone rings and Kevin picks up.

“I’m sorry.” He hears Tommy say.

“Don’t bother.”

“I never meant to lie.”

“But you did it anyway.”

“I’m going to Seattle and talk to Julia.” There’s ( Read more... )

character - kevin, character - tommy

Comments 8

luna_veritas November 10 2009, 16:06:28 UTC

Wow! Powerful, short and to the point. That was perfect....
"You’re not her father. I am.” Kevin replies coldly and Tommy hangs up."
*Ouch*!

marea67 November 12 2009, 16:25:26 UTC

Thanks, I sometimes wish that Kevin would really get mad at someone. (Not Scotty!) He's too nice.

luna_veritas November 13 2009, 13:43:55 UTC

Yes anyone but Scotty! If I was Kevin I think I would have combusted by now with anger and frustration. I hate to quote him but something Robert said in Glass Houses always comes to mind..."No one can slide the knife in quite like the ones we love'

srtawalker November 11 2009, 14:07:18 UTC

Ouch!!

This is not good :( , but Tommy deserves it.

marea67 November 12 2009, 16:26:23 UTC

I agree. For once I'd like to see Kevin stand up for himself (and Elizabeth) and be terribly honest as only Kevin can be. :)

adishatz November 19 2009, 20:53:04 UTC

I feel a bit sorry for Tommy here... But he deserved it! Well done :)

marea67 November 22 2009, 10:39:23 UTC

I agree, Tommy deserved it, for losing Kevin's trust. I would LOVE for Kevin to get really mad once.

kimifan4ever November 29 2009, 00:16:20 UTC

Wow, a few angst, but I loved!
Tommy let me down some times :(