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marea67

Brothers

Oct 29, 2009 21:49

Brothers

By Marea67

About: Kevin, Scotty, Robert, Jason

Rate: G (Sorry!)

Disclaimer: Not mine. I know.

Summary: What is it like to be a brother?

( Brothers )

character - kevin, character - robert, character - scotty, character - jason

Comments 8

luna_veritas October 30 2009, 13:50:39 UTC

Sweet! loved the surprise ending that was great! The interaction between these 4 is brilliantly honest and am glad to see new relationships being forged. Well done!

marea67 October 30 2009, 19:48:13 UTC

Thanks! I didn't plan the ending when I was writing, but as I was posting it suddenly felt 'wrong' that Scotty would do it behind Kevin's back. Glad you liked it.

darkestboy October 30 2009, 14:21:51 UTC

Very nice ending.

marea67 October 30 2009, 19:49:20 UTC

Thanks, especially since I re-wrote the ending just before posting.. :)

semisweetsoul October 30 2009, 22:26:21 UTC

I like that very much! How surprising! I love the end, didn't see it coming, nice surprise. Maybe there's hope to have Jason come back now with new show-runners.

Thanks for keeping Jason alive :)

marea67 October 31 2009, 01:42:28 UTC

I thought you'd like it. :D

srtawalker October 31 2009, 13:00:50 UTC

I think I begin to be repetitive, but I love your stories. Especialment in which all the brothers are out.
You have a knack for making them dynamic and interesting while tender and funny. I'm passionate about them :)

Please more. I love Scotty in this one. He is so perfect :D

kriestern January 31 2013, 20:14:54 UTC

I love how, in your stories, everyone thinks that Kevin doesn't know what Scotty does, but he always does. I love how you write the two of them- they are just so real.