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my_cnnr in mapmakerfic

A Letter From Home

Apr 02, 2006 16:21

( “Your girl gives the censorship boys the fits.” Fitzwilliam laughed as he dropped a letter onto Ralph’s desk. “Although, I think really they look forward to her letters.” )

poicale, the charioteer

Comments 12

keeley12 April 2 2006, 23:02:52 UTC

Love it. I have also been waiting patiently for a new story. Love them keep them coming.

poicale April 7 2006, 03:29:58 UTC

I am so glad you enjoyed the story! And I'm so glad you like TC, it's always good to have new fans of such a wonderful story.

trueriver April 3 2006, 07:36:58 UTC

Mmmmmmmmmmmmm, nicely erotic, naughty Laurie! ;)

poicale April 7 2006, 03:30:38 UTC

*blushes* that Laurie is shocking, isn't he? :-) You can just imagine him batting his eyelashes and saying, "what, me?"

trueriver April 7 2006, 21:18:13 UTC

What a WONDERFUL image! Delicious Laurie! ;-)

how come I never get mail like that.... my_cnnr April 3 2006, 10:23:10 UTC

I think Ralph might stay away just to keep getting mail like that...when it all overtakes you...delicious...and having to wait - from previous experience was too funny...you already know the waiting towel mase me roll...

thanks for sharing - I think we need to find you more school holidays!

oh wait - my_cnnr April 3 2006, 10:24:42 UTC

I do!....

Re: oh wait - poicale April 7 2006, 03:31:40 UTC

that's funny to think about - naughty emails vs. naughty letters. :-) so glad you enjoyed. I've been enjoying working on my other stories - I hope to work more on them this weekend!

mysid April 3 2006, 13:32:04 UTC

Love this! Laurie's letter was just steamy enough to give both Ralph and the censors a thrill, but not so porny to be OOC for Laurie.
"...when it all overtakes you..." Beautifully said.

poicale April 7 2006, 03:33:27 UTC

I'm so glad you liked the story. I tried very hard to make the letter steamy and yet true to the character and so I'm glad it seemed to work, since I know you know the book so well! :-) That's one of my favorite lines too. :-)

Wonderful biggerbuns May 15 2006, 23:28:58 UTC

Oh my aching heart!!! What a lovely piece *pun intended*.... Laurie sure can write a hot one! Great feeling! Truly enjoyed it. Thank you.

Re: Wonderful poicale May 16 2006, 01:29:59 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed! It's always lovely to get feedback. I tried very hard to make Laurie's letter hot without being TOO smutty. :-)