[FIC] JEALOUSY

[maomaochan]

Jealousy

Couple: Daimao (Watanabe Daisuke x Hamao Kyousuke)

Length: over 2800 words

Beta'd: kot_kendra

Summary:

Watanabe Daisuke has never considered himself as a jealous man...but recently, on more than one occasion, he finds the little green eyes monster resting comfortably on his shoulder, given to him by his cute young lover.

For anncho! xDDD

Comments

[maomaochan]

Thank you! ^^
LOL I'm glad you liked that! I'd think that be a cute nickname for their nightly activities right? ;DD

Thank you for reading!

[maomaochan]

You're welcome! ^___^

Haha I'm happy you like it! Dai-chan needs another nickname other than "Mao" since everyone uses it ;)) Let's hope that he really uses a nickname like that in private *hehe*

[darkqueen_25]

Oh gosh, so sweet my tooth hurts. :D <333 Dai-kun's jealously is adorable and funny~ Mao-chan is so sweet~

[maomaochan]

LOL your poor sweet tooth *pats pats*
Ikr! Daisuke is so cute when he's jealous xDD I love imagining Daisuke being jealous b/c its so not like him, so it's funny when he doesn't understand why he feels that way with Mao. He's so confused HAHA
Yep yep! Mao is such a nice boyfriend! He would never cheat on his handsome boyfriend ;))

[trish_thu]

cant image Daichan in a jelous man, but he may and its nice to see how much he love Mao. Its just a fic but still give me a lots emotion,

thanks

[maomaochan]

Yea Daisuke isn't really the jealous type because he's too carefree and easy-going to be worried about jealousy. Which is kinda of what I wanted to show is that, it's only just w/ Mao that he has those feelings, which is why he's so confused lol :)) so it is kinda OOC for him

But I'm glad alot of those emotions came through from Daisuke. Like how much he cares for Mao and doesn't want to lose him ^___^

Ur welcome! And thank you for your comment! :DD

[anncho]

:3 :3 :3 Why am i the last one to see this and comment?.. *pouts*..XDDDD

Hehehe...i really liked the story, even though it wasn't the one i thought *giggles* You are one damn writer gurl :DDDDDD.. LOL...I mean, you are superb writer hahaha...

Keep on writing, i'm always here to read it and feed it...LOL...Kekekeke...

Thanks for writing such a cute story Hun :3

[maomaochan]

Haha gomen tomodachi! Nxt time, I'll PM you right away! -__^

Thanks I'm glad you liked! *hugs* I'm sorry it wasn't what you had imagined, but I'm so happy you liked it anyway. And don't worry, I will definitely write that version soon too, since I plan to make alot more Daimao jealous fics ;)) So I promise to have the Baba verison out soon too ^^
Really? Awww thank you so much! *blushes* I'm really not tho, but thank you for saying so! It makes me feel really good to hear that from you tomodachi! *more hugs*

LOL okay thanks! I will :DD

Thank you so much for reading tomodachi!! xDD

[mystical_powers]

Ooooo I really liked this fic =D Good job ^_^
Glad I got to read it!
And you write really well also! =D

[maomaochan]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it! xDD
I'm glad you got to read it too! I always look forward to your feedback ;))
Thanks! My writing can be too descriptive and repetitive at times, but I hope it's getting better over time ;))

Thank you for reading! *hugs*

[mystical_powers]

What feedback do you want? ^_^
I like descriptive though. Hence why I love Shakespeare and Tolkien so much ><

No problem =D

[maomaochan]

Any kind! Any kind of advice or criticism, I don't mind, I'm always looking for ways to improve. So if you see something you think I need to improve on, don't be afraid to tell me k? ;))

I do too. I love those kind of descriptive stories. I have be able to imagine it to the slighest detail :33
But I suck at dialogue, so I need to get better at that, so I'm trying focus on dialogue more next time >