[FIC]~STAY WITH ME~
Title: Stay With Me
Couple: DaiMao (Watanabe Daisuke x Hamao Kyousuke)
Genre: Fluffy/Cute
Word Count: a little over 2800 words (not too bad, but it was supposed to be shorter, oh well LOL)
Summary:
Mao thinks his date with Daisuke is completely ruined when he wakes up extremely sick one morning, but when his older lover shows up at his door, well, you ( Read more... )
Couple: DaiMao (Watanabe Daisuke x Hamao Kyousuke)
Genre: Fluffy/Cute
Word Count: a little over 2800 words (not too bad, but it was supposed to be shorter, oh well LOL)
Summary:
Mao thinks his date with Daisuke is completely ruined when he wakes up extremely sick one morning, but when his older lover shows up at his door, well, you ( Read more... )
I'm the kind of person that lives off of descriptions so I may never get bored with your writing~ Dialogue is fun but descriptions make pretty mental pictures! :D
8"D I feel at home in this fandom already! *hugs you* Yes they do! And it's like they don't even try ;A; I really just want them to get married and stuff~ The fic was so cute, at first I felt so bad for Mao but then Daisuke came and made everything better. So I was like 'YEESSSSSS NOW KISS' XDDD
Really, I can't get over how cute these guys are, I knew Mao enjoyed the babying and yes, Daisuke is definitely a handsome hero~ :D Like superman except better :P
Aww, I'm glad my comment made your day better~ :D
LOL It's because your journal is prettyandamazingandmindblowingandIseeboysloveand awesome. *3* Oh yes that kiss... from that scene... from that movie... from that series... that had that scene~ I love it all so much tbh. TuT
*fist pumps* Oh yeah! And don't worry about that~ I'm still getting back into fandom in general so it's all good ^_^
Oh you're welcome bb and yes, it's gonna be so much fun fangirling together~! ^3^
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Haha I'm the same way! :)) I enjoy detailed paragraphs of the characters every move more than I enjoy the dialogue. Dialogue can only say so much than an author can when they describe the setting ^^Actually when I write, I write the whole thing without dialogue first and then add dialoque when I go back over it haha
Yay I'm glad! *hugs* Ikr! Their affection and care for each other is so natural. Almost real ;DDD
I do too! I would be the happiest girl in the world if they would just admit they are in love already. Enough making us fangirls sweat already! LOL
Haha yea I kinda made Mao miserable in this story. Poor Mao *hugs* But yea, Daisuke will always be around to make Mao smile and feel happy again ^^ and I was originally going to have more kisses and stuff, but I figured just an innocent, fluffy bed scene instead ;))
Yep yep! 100x better than superman! He's the ultimate superhero xD
Yes it did! Thank you :3
LOL yea, I've always loved BL so I wanted to make my journal a BL haven to obsess on! So I'm glad you like it :))
Me too! It's my favorite scene out of the 4 movies so far. Actually, my favorite movie scene EVER! xDD So much love and passion in that scene. My heart explodes every time I rewatch it *___*
Okay! Sounds good. Just making sure you knew ;))
Yep yep it will! To fangirling to together~Kanpai! ^^
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It's almost like you're in my mind~ :D It's fun to have dialogue though XD Really? That sounds like hard work~ Actually, I just write and after every paragraph I scroll back up read the whole thing over before continuing OTL *is a perfectionist*
*squeezes you* LOL what are you talking about? It is real~ :DDD
LOL If only they would just take your advice! Then everyone would be happy~ :DD
LOL That was the angst lover in you acting up ;P Yup Daisuke will love all the discomfort out of Mao~ :D LOL I think either way it's goooood ^3^ LOL I should have known you would agree (Mao would too) |D
Aaw your welcome Madi bb~ ^^
Me too~ BL is like the only thing that interests me for the past... 4 or 5 years~~ I'm glad you made it a BL haven~!! :"D
Oh yes! Best movie moment ever~ I love it so much ;A;
LOL I don't think it would make much difference either way though ^_^
Kanpai~! That makes me think of chibi people yelling and drinking fruit punch~ XD
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LOL I have no idea. I guess people just like their favorite characters to get hurt I guess. That and I think all fangirls are alittle sadistic LOL jk jk ;))
Haha I guess we really think alike then ^_^ Yea it is fun with dialogue, especially when it is very interesting dialogue but mine always seem like it's 5 year olds that are talking and not teens or adults LOL
That's good! Good to be a perfectionist! ;DD You probably get more ideas when you read back over it and add more stuff ne? That's a good way to do it! ^^
LOL of course! What was I thinking?! Must be the sleep talking. You're so right, it IS most definitely real ~__^
Yea I think it was. I had to get some of that angst out and I tortured poor Mao with it. But I made him happy at the end when Daisuke held him while he slept, so I think I'm forgiven ;33
So true, Daisuke will make sure Mao will get better, even if he had to force feed him medicine the whole time haha
Me too! Me too! I know more BL mangas/animes than I know about anything else for the past couple of years. I need to BL in everything, otherwise it doesn't interest me haha :)))
Haha no probably not. We have many other similar interests, so yea it wouldn't have really mattered there ;3
LOL now that you've said that, I can imagien that too! But we can be the chibi people cheering to our fruit punch haha (which I am drinking right now btw *.*)
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LOL You may be onto something there! ...OMG you're right! Fangirls are (partial) sadists who like to torture their biases! LOL what a world xDD
Hehe it sure looks like it :D At least yours is like that, I can't even describe mine LOLOL OTL
Perfectionism will kill you bb don't take that path xDD Yeah, sometimes you get ideas and sometimes... you wonder what the heck you're doing LOL I'm glad you think so though~
LOLOL Yeah, you're a bit tired~ You just made a mistake because it's almost too good to be real! There's no shame in that~ *u*
LMAO It's a good thing you had mercy because you were supposed to be writing fluff! Yeah the happy ending made everyone forgive you xDD
adsfgdfghj Daisuke can force feed Mao with anything however he wants!! *p*
BL does this to all of us! We become addicted to it OTL Same here! No BL, no interest~ :DD LOL yup! We would have been able to get along either way ^3^
LOLOL Okay~ We'll be little chibi people cheering to our fruit punch! :D (really? omg I must be psychic! ~_^)
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Yep yep they are! It's so fun to find ways to write the romantic scenes and definitely more of a challenge too ^^
Thank you for being so supportive! It means alot *huggles* I won't give up too much on angst, but I think Daimao is more a fluffy couple, so I will always write them fluffy :33
Yep yep they are! And I think I'm fully sadist LOL ^__^ I love my biases and would defend them until the end, but I do soo love to torture them. But mostly to see the end when they're saved and get loved on by their lovers ;DD
Yours' is 5000x better than mine I'm sure ;DD
Haha Really? Uh oh! I think I've become more a perfectionist the older I get lol. I can understand how you feel, your ideas are constantly changing in your head and then you write it down and you're like 'no that's not right' and erase and start over LOL
Haha thanks for understanding that! xDD
Yea I'm glad I stopped when I did. I actually had Mao being in that misery longer before meeting with Daisuke, but I figured I tortured him enough when he walked out the door ;PP
Totally agree! xDDD
Yep yep it does :DD The good kind of addiction tho...if there is one haha.
LOL yes we will! That'll be how I imagine our fangirling moments HAHA
(haha you must be! I was really surprised haha)
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It is! Especially when the scene is interesting and sounds pretty~ :DD
Aaw you're welcome~ I know support helps a writer keep going, so that means you better keep writing! 8D *squishes* LOL 'too much'? xDD Daimao is a fluffy couple~ I see them and I feel as though I should brush my teeth so they don't fall out, see the level of their fluffiness? xDD Yes be sure to write them as fluffy as cotton candy :"D
I think all fangirls share that mindset at some point in their fangirl life xDD I'm like that too LOL Especially seeing them get loved on by their lovers~ :DD
I doubt that OTL
Really! It's no laughing matter bb, stop becoming a perfectionist! It will eat you alive lol. That's exactly how it is! And sometimes you forget what you wanted the point of what you were writing to be and then... LOL This is life.
It's okay dear, that kind of stuff happens all the time to me people! xDD
Were you going to have him pass out on the bus or something- why would you do that you little sadist xDDD Yeah, he can feed himthat special 'couple's way' all the time if when he wants! :P
It is, is comes with almost no regrets~ 8DD Except for the fact that you get bored of books, movies, anything that does not at least hint at BL xDD
LOLOL our fangirling moments are chibi versions of us cheering, probably screaming, and drinking fruit punch xDDDD (lol careful I may be stalking you xDD)
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HAHA yep yep! That's definitely a very high fluffiness-level for Daimao! Yaaay! xDD I feel our poor teeth are victims of the Daimao cuteness *.*
Of course, Daimao's love will always be like cotton candy and moutains of chocolate and candies too -__^ Tho, I might be tempted to write some sexy fics. Those might not be as sweet...maybe more spicy? Is that okay too? ^^
Yea I think so too. Some more than others, but it happens ;33
Yep I agree. Especially when they are loving each other at the end. The love-making seems so much more sweet after all of the angst they went through. It seems more passionate and cute ^___^
Haha sorry! I can't help it! Perfectionism is taking me over like a drug *hides* But I will try to resist! *fighting back*
Yes exactly! I don't know how many times I've written so many pages and at the end I'm like: "okay where was I going with this? What's the point?" And then I have to go back and figure out what the point of this story was LOL Yep it does happen alot in life. Especially for us fangirls and our writings ;DD
Haha no I was going to have him meet with Daisuke and than passout once he sees Daisuke. And Daisuke catches him and carries him back his (Daisuke's) house *hehehe* But I figured that was too much, so I just had Daisuke meet Mao had his house instead xP
Yep yep! Like: Daisuke makes Mao give him a kiss in exchange for a piece of chocolate hehehe! ;))
Yep! Definitely no regrets! xDD Haha yea that's true. I feel like sometimes I do miss out on some good stories xP my friends and coworkers talk about the books and movies they've seen and I have no idea what they're talking about @__@ But oh well, the BLness is worth it haha ;DD
That's us! And waving our fangirling flags and wearing our BL bandanas, t-shirts, and other accessories! Ah! I can see us now *imagines* LOL
LOL what a coincidence! I'm stalking you too *hehehe* Tho, it's not really stalking if one of us knows the other one of us is stalking is it? HAHA -___^
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