Non-challenge: A Policeman's Tale (Day 54)

[ytak]

Title: A Policeman's Tale (Day 54)
Author: ytak
Word count:  1013
Rating (chapter):  K+ (PG)  
Rating (whole story):  T (PG-13)
Comments:  I'm trying to figure out the best way to finish up the last chapter but, otherwise, I'm done writing the story.  :)  I'm surprised at how fast I wrote the last seven chapters (seriously, I did it in about a week and

Comments

[marsdejahthoris]

Aw, Taru-kun, everybody loves you! You're sweet and compassionate and considerate and badass!

LOVE the jokes about the paperwork... only too true, I'm sure.

[ytak]

Well, I don't know about his fellow officers but I know we do! ^_^

I'm sure Conan and co. create tons of paperwork from their help.

[marsdejahthoris]

Well, they SHOULD. Saitou and Kenshin have a bet going in "Wanderers"-verse. Saitou thinks that when Takagi's temper snaps, skulls will be cracked. Kenshin thinks it'll be confined to property damage.

Saitou: Blood or not, he's YOUR SON, Battousai. Someday soon, they're going to push too hard, and he's going to push back.
Kenshin: You're probably right, that you are.

[ytak]

They should.

Ooo, more "Wanderers." I've been poking around, rereading those stories. I had this image today of Ryuu meeting the Shonen Tantei. *snicker* I can imagine the trouble they'd all get into.

[mdchan]

Haha...the sentence about the paperwork for the "Conan Cases" was great.

XD

Though, it appears as if some words are missing in that paragraph. It'd sound a bit better if it was "or any combination of the above", rather than just going from "combination" to "above".

Otherwise, great chapter as usual!

[ytak]

Heh. Glad you liked that line. Can you imagine just how much paperwork he causes with his help? XD

Hmmm, I think I typed it that way originally and found it too wordy for my tastes. But thanks for your feedback. It's something for me to keep in mind. I sometimes drop words without meaning to.

Thanks. ^_^