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Kuroba 'Verse

Feb 15, 2009 23:40

The pages of the newspaper rustled as Kaito idly flipped through its pages. The teen looked perfectly relaxed, slouched comfortably in his chair. His exotic blue-violet eyes scanned over the articles, committing the information to memory. He never knew when it might come in handy.

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Comments 8

gemininus February 16 2009, 08:26:21 UTC

INCREDIBLE. I must read ur other fics! just so u know, i complete went "awwww" at "baby raven" AWWWWW!!!!!!!

peppymint1986 February 16 2009, 17:28:25 UTC

Thank you. I am not even sure why I wrote that except compared to Puck Kaito is a baby. It just came to me.

On another note, any idea why the entry is so big. I mean, I put all the writing behind the but. I just don't get it.

gemininus February 17 2009, 01:47:45 UTC

BECAUSE LJ IS SCREEEEEEWYY!!!!!!!! BUT WHO GIVES A DAMN?! I just adore the way you wrote Kid!!!!! kyaaaaaaaaa~

marsdejahthoris February 17 2009, 00:08:59 UTC

Eeeentahresting. You're getting better with each story you do, really. Unfortunately for me, I can't seem to imagine Oberon and his court without seeing the Gargoyles Versions, but that's hardly your fault.

peppymint1986 February 17 2009, 04:41:47 UTC

That is okay. To be honest neither can I. Titania sort of has some originality going on. But as for Puck. Yeah, I totally pictured the gargoyles version looking at Kaito while lounging in midair. I just couldn't help myself.

marsdejahthoris February 17 2009, 15:22:32 UTC

Brent Spiner has such a wonderful VOICE, doesn't he? :)

A friend of mine pointed out the similarities between Owen Burnett and Saguru once... I'm going to hide under the bed now...

vampslyr February 17 2009, 06:41:53 UTC

Oh WOW! That was incredibly awesome! I worry that Kaito's gained both Titania and Puck's interest, but so far they seem pleased by his character. I was wondering if Hakuba didn't have an aura, or if Kaito just doesn't have as much interest in it as he does the girls' auras. I love all the little details that really come together to make this fic. The by-play with the task force is priceless and I haven't seen it this well done in a while. It's just over all really really cool.

peppymint1986 February 17 2009, 07:50:10 UTC

Eh, more like Hakuba was just there as oppose to approaching him. As I seem to be going with the theme the eyes are the windows to the soul his will probably have some gold in it.

What I am really waiting for is Shinichi's though. That is what is going to tip Kaito off right off the bat that something is screwy. Conan does not have a child's aura. Plus, he has met Kudo before.