Non-challenge: A Policeman's Tale (Day 13)

Mar 19, 2008 23:06

 Title:   A Policeman's Tale (Day 13)
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zangetsugirl March 20 2008, 05:15:40 UTC
Oooh, 'nother Takagi-story chapter...*pounces*

A single single white rose in a vase remained unwilted among all the floors O_o Y'mean "flowers," maybe? That's the only off note I saw in the fic.

I have to say, I really like the way you show the nuts and bolts of police work, even if parts of it are kind of from a sideways glance. It makes the whole thing feel much more realistic.

Awwww, Takagi plotting to do something for Sato is SO CUTE. Honestly, he's just adorable sometimes. Good job, as always.

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ytak March 20 2008, 12:33:52 UTC
Whoops. I missed that. Thanks for catching it.

He is adorable. We need another story about him and Sato in the manga.

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